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This is a prey point of view story. It is meant to allow you to immerse yourself in the role.
You play as a fox that has just disturbed an seemingly harmless prey.
This is dedicated my friend Vidofinir who has inspired me to write.
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Posted by Gelenor 11 years ago Report
That was quite a well written story and from the first person view no less, which is admittedly harder to do. It had everything I like in a vore story, a cruel taunting pred, per vore scat and watersports which is but a glimpse of what the prey is going to become and finally vore with scat after digestion. Good job. I will be watching you.... in the good way.
Posted by Thecouriousone 11 years ago Report
Thank you for your compliments. :) I tried really hard on this one and I thought the first person perspective would allow the reader to emerse themselves more into the story to make it more interactive and enjoyable. And I am thankful for the watch.
Posted by Eolwin 11 years ago Report
That was a nice story ^^ I like the way you write. I hope to see more from you soon!
Posted by Thecouriousone 11 years ago Report
Thank you very much. :) I will be trying to put out some more writing this week and am aiming for one at least every other week depending on inspiration.
Posted by rugli 11 years ago Report
THIS story was very very well written. Bravo.
But I do wonder have you written more stories similar to this one.
Personally I think stories with herbivore preds vs carnivore preys are one of the best concept when it comes to vore.
Mind me asking are you planning to write more similar to this one or have you alredy written more ?
Posted by Thecouriousone 11 years ago Report
Thank you. :)
Well, to answer your first question, I have not written anything like this or anything before. This is my first story I have ever written. I wrote it for Vidofinir and at the time I was thinking about getting a gallery when he influenced me to go through with it.
(Which by the way you should check out his Unlikely Threat story because it does match what you like in a story. Just thought I could give you a good reading suggestion in the mean time. :) )
Anyway, I do like he idea of unlikely prey preding on seemingly unstoppable preds. Or a weak prey out smarting a strong pred into becoming prey. It is always a good read.
As of now, I am currently working on a story that was taken from a vb with me and Vidofinir from a while back and making it more prey oriented. After that I have three other ideas for stories I am wanting to write. One of them for sure will be written inthe same format as this one.
I hope that answers everything. :) and thank you for the comment.
Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
Sorry for late response, but yeah these stories, are such a turn on.
I have read Unliely Treat and is pretty net,
Yes there is something mistique about such stories when the preds becomes prey.
I suspect you have already posted the onve with vidofinir, but if still consider those three other ideas, you mentioned I did love to hear about them if you havent got around to write them already. And maybe if you are interested i did be RP some of them.
Posted by Thecouriousone 10 years ago Report
It's alright, I always appreciate comments late or not. :)I have been gone for a while and have just returned. I have forgotten one of the stories, but I have made the other with Vidofinir as you commented on already.
Anyway, I have a new series idea which I will be posting in my blog momentarily.
Posted by Speedyblupi 9 years ago Report
Very nice, aside from a few typos (mostly swapping D and S).