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Love Conquers Maw: Part 3 :Cannibal Wolfess Of The Amazon!
(EDIT: FIXED SOME SPELLING AND OTHER CHANGES)
Nonsense aplenty as Boomer and Robert's series continues.
Boomer keeps getting herself into trouble with her boyfriend's nephews. Also, graphic sex and vore in the same chapter for once!
It's like one of those 2-for1 deals!
Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
Mind if I ask for a bit of clarification on the part just before the last scene of the movie? I'm confused and probably fussing without reason, but the part where it says "The scene was about over...And So was her Costar."
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Posted by Boomwolf 11 years ago Report
Are You asking if he really died?
It would have come up in the next part of the story.
(It was only meant to imply his death in the script but I wrote it so no one was sure if was real or not until later.
(I was trying to give the folks who like digestion something )
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
I figured that, I was just, eh, I dunno. Fretting a bit I guess. Curse of being an endosomatophile I guess.
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Posted by Boomwolf 11 years ago Report
Well, apart from that, any other complaints? Like the story?
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
You actually got me to tell Willowa about the story, after similar situation came up(About vornos.). I can't say it's a complaint really though, considering behind the scenes is the important part. I normally don't keep up with vore stories, but this is one I do like.
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Posted by Boomwolf 11 years ago Report
Who? Wait, if you don't keep up with them, what are you doing on ...this particular site? XD
But what do you mean a similar situation? ^^
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
I don't like fatal situations, I already left for about two months for a refresher course, to keep my mind from going insane.
Willowa is a chat friend who I roleplay with, she has a character generally designed for this setting.
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Posted by Boomwolf 11 years ago Report
Oh cool.
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
But, hers is also fatal so I tend to avoid it, so it was nice to see she took interest in your idea.
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Posted by Boomwolf 11 years ago Report
Oh does that mean she read it too?
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
No, but I'm going to make her read it to get ideas. :v
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Posted by Rougia 11 years ago Report
Oh that is eeeevil! Leavin' it on a cliffhanger like that! >:P
Okay, so, Robert's out for the night, and 3 horny little bunnies are home alone with Auntie Boomer... And if that ending is any indication, some part of the boys (if not all) is definitely going to be finding a way into Boomer in the next chapter. Ah'm definitely lookin' forward to it, sugar. :3
Loving the setting, and the pacing of the story, but again.. may wanna do some editing, throw in italics on stuff like flash backs or for the DVD parts. Hard to separate if you're readin' fast, like ah tend to do.
All in all, a good read. Keep it up!
~Rougia
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Posted by Thefoxcyan 8 years ago Report
so when will you continue?
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Posted by FoxThyan 3 years ago Report
This is extremely well written. I like where this is going.
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