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The original intention of this work was to sort of generate a world for an OC that popped into my head (Reia), it wasn't initially intended to be vore. However, as I fleshed her out in my head (I often "write stories" in my head in the shower--9/10 it is never translated to paper) I couldn't help but start her out this way and have vore be a part of the world.
Anyway, this is less of a fetish work and more of an establishing one; I want to establish the world so that the vore can mean something in my stories, I suppose.
It all starts with our young heroine awakening to learn she knows nothing about herself--just trivial educational facts. She also realizes she's not in the best of predicaments either...
As always, leave a comment and fave if you think it was a good enough story!
Also if you think of any tags appropriate to the story don't be afraid to add...lol.
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Posted by Venefica 11 years ago Report
I still say you should keep this going, I'm so glad to see you writing again! ^w^
Honestly this story's kinda gotten be a bit inspired to go back to my own work-in-progress too.
Posted by Dualgunner 11 years ago Report
Thanks, Venny! Good luck on your story! :3
Posted by Thanatos2k 11 years ago Report
Ineresting. Hopefully there'll be a sequel.
Posted by TheWickedKing 11 years ago Report
Dang, see, and you wonder why I and others want to rp with you so much. it was a fun story, and one I hope gets a continuation. As far as constructive criticism goes, the only ones I can give are on some of your choices of words and some phrases could be improved. But really, that's just me being nit-picky and finding faults where there aren't any.
The information of these houses is also making me quite curious to find out more about this world. =)
Posted by Dualgunner 11 years ago Report
o3o
You commented and faved!
*hug*
Posted by Kali 11 years ago Report
Good. I like the details. The plot is also rather convicing, something rare for most ficticious parallel universes. Will there be another story?
Posted by Dualgunner 11 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
I'm writing Chapter Two right now, just enjoying a nice break from writing after a week of essays. :3