really like it, especially how Raven came out. One note, though: The last speech bubble isn't worded the way people speak, and any voreaphile already knows what she's telling beast boy. I would suggest something more like "Bye, Beast Boy." Though I don't think you needed her to say anything in the last panel.
Posted by Nibor 10 years ago Report
Not my cup of tea... Raven may be an alien, but she's too humanlike.
Posted by Dudeifail1 10 years ago Report
really like it, especially how Raven came out. One note, though: The last speech bubble isn't worded the way people speak, and any voreaphile already knows what she's telling beast boy. I would suggest something more like "Bye, Beast Boy." Though I don't think you needed her to say anything in the last panel.
Posted by Nova 10 years ago Report
thanks a lot. Well I got the text from the customer but thanks for the information :D