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a quick little story i threw together in about an hour for a certain infamous forum
here's looking at you /v/
not my picture
Posted by RisingMoon336 10 years ago Report
First. Not bad, it could have been a little longer with some more detail and no need to use filthy to describe yourself when the Vore was quite soft and nurturing rather than hostle and degrading.
Second. I thought that creepy ass bird was always a duck, and the apron that goes around her neck is called a bib. That's just a nitpick though.
Lastly, I think I would have preferred a story of Chicka trying to get you but despite your arousal you stayed away because you knew what would happen if you were forced into those spinning gears and moving beams inside, but that is pretty gory and I can totally let slide your idea for a sudo stomache over the latter.
Bonus, you should probably skip the fox. I'm fairly certain that crazy asshole from pirate cove is responsible for the infamous bite of 87' where he bit someone and took a chunk of their head.
Posted by Edibility 10 years ago Report
I was suprised for such a fully fleshed response for a quick joke story. You made my day
Posted by dkrule 8 years ago Report
part two?
Posted by Hot_Plate 10 years ago Report
I like it, being trapped inside a suprisingly fleshy animatronic for hours or even days. Veyr kinky. :3
Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 years ago Report
I’m pretty sure your not the only person in that animatronic
Posted by scootaloorulez1997 10 years ago Report
honestly i had a feeling there would be vore of that game. and i called it.
p.s ur knot rdy 4 freddy.~
Posted by Kligor 10 years ago Report
Especially since it says "lets eat" on the bib I thought the same thing.
"First rule 34 then vore of said r34 characters."
Posted by Kligor 10 years ago Report
Quite a well written story. I have yet to even play the game although I bought it. Im too chicken shit to play it. (hehehe chicken shit. That coulda been a pun had this story went differently)
Posted by ButtPlug 10 years ago Report
I came.
Posted by laywall 6 years ago Report
NO ONE GIVES A SHIT
Posted by FNAFLover123 10 years ago Report
*pokes Chica*
Posted by threk 10 years ago Report
For a quick little story, that was actually pretty hot :)
Posted by nanitebunny 8 years ago Report
Link to the thumbnail pic?