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The Cocky Adventures of Rukia By captainjane -- Report

Alright so I'm not gonna lie I suck at writing stories or anything in general, I haven't wrote anything since high school an that was 6 years ago So don't expect a masterpiece don't expect something with proper grammar and spacing.

I wrote this because I wanted somewhat of a back story as to why Rukia is Orihime's dick and I couldn't find anyone to write it for me so her is my shitty attempt at a story

If you like it leave a comment if you feel like I could improve something about the story leave a comment if you don't like it and just plan to criticize it don't bother leaving a comment cause I don't want to hear it.

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dragonfred

Posted by dragonfred 10 years ago Report

good story :)

captainjane

Posted by captainjane 10 years ago Report

Thank you for reading it, I'm glad you liked it.

Peldms63

Posted by Peldms63 10 years ago Report

I will say, feels kind of odd to have the transformation in the first paragraph, then doing the actual story. Feel it would've been nice to have it in order of progression, as I think it's a cute story and it gives the transformation a sense of place and award for reading.

But it's your story, and I still liked it.

captainjane

Posted by captainjane 10 years ago Report

As stated I'm a terrible writer and I made up the story as I went with no planning. I just wrote what came to mind. I'm glad that you liked it.