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An incomplete story for those interested in it. I wasn't happy with how this was going, so for now, I'm just going to leave it like this.
Instead, I'm writing another, completely different version to try and fix this.
I've had this sitting around for months after publishing part 5 which I wasn't too happy with either. So, it was time to just get it out of the way.
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Posted by x9comega 10 years ago Report
If you want, I could download edit and finish this, then send you my own end result. But only with your consent, of course
Posted by Suibelly 10 years ago Report
Sure, if you want to. I might be writing in a different direction though, but go for it.
Posted by anndygirl 10 years ago Report
D: Bad Sui
I:
TT^TT
Posted by Suibelly 10 years ago Report
Sorry, I just didn't like this story. ^^;
Posted by anndygirl 10 years ago Report
I understand u.u
PS: you include me in the next >.<
Posted by Suibelly 10 years ago Report
Oh? Yeah, I could include you in one of them. ^^
Posted by anndygirl 10 years ago Report
please no sex and Hermaphrodites with me u.u
sorry but I am embarrassed #._.#
Posted by Suibelly 10 years ago Report
Ah, alright. Well the next one has sex, so maybe the one after that.
Posted by ChillMistressFreia 10 years ago Report
Shame that you didn't like where it was going!
Posted by Suibelly 10 years ago Report
It just felt forced and I couldn't even add anything without feeling awkward, haha.
Posted by CommanderStar78 10 years ago Report
I like the story and I will look forward to what you do Love all of your work