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The next part in this series, and final one I've written so far. If you were hoping for a vore story, tough. You're getting a meandering story about chess with occasional bits of vore thrown in.
I will probably continue this story at some point, but it took me over a year after writing this to get round to polishing and posting it, so don't hold your breath.
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Posted by AddictedDreamer 10 years ago Report
I really like this series! Hope you finish it, though I probably won't be here to see any more of it. :P
Aslo just pointing out a few mistakes I noticed (I put down the correct one tho):
*Not surprisingly he lost.
*A fine solution if I just wanted to go upstairs, but if I needed to do so quickly it would be a problem.
*For a while we both sat in silence, both eating our respective snacks, then Iscala stretched and picked up the book I had seen her reading on my second day.
*Not that it mattered much in the end, a few minutes after I had changed spots the wriggling in her belly died away and her belly quieted down a little.
*Another forty-five minutes and you'd have joined the bunny and those raisins as a literal midnight snack."
Posted by BizzareBlue 10 years ago Report
Changes made.
Thank you for pointing those out to me.
Posted by Jay1743 10 years ago Report
I am really enjoying this story. It pushes all the right buttons for me, and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted by BizzareBlue 10 years ago Report
Thank you. I'll start work on this series again soon.
Posted by Littledude 10 years ago Report
I thought it did well as a vore story. While it is disappointing that this is the end, one could look at this as a series of vignettes as a pred and prey living together rather than a single, interconnected narrative.
Posted by BizzareBlue 10 years ago Report
Glad you like it. I guess the first few days are fairly unconnected and could be read as seperate stories, but my plans for the next few days make them more connected.
Posted by LiterallyWhat 10 years ago Report
Please continue this; it's amazing. I made an account just to post this.
Posted by BizzareBlue 10 years ago Report
Thank you. That's incredibly flattering. I definitely will continue this, and have already got the next few days planned out, but it may take a while before I have any of them ready to post.
Posted by LiterallyWhat 10 years ago Report
I'll be waiting!