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During the original writing, I had been so engrossed in the story of Lance, Selia, Julia, and Karl, that I really wanted to focus on them... But I felt that two chapters in a row on the same thing was a bit much, so this came out... After all, what are all the other characters doing while Leon and Ressanna delve into Lineage Memory?
Now, with the benefit of 3+ months' worth of hind-sight... I'm a bit nervous and unsure of this particular chapter... Mainly because of the central event in this chapter...
As always, thank you for reading, and tell me what you think...
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Posted by playafreek 10 years ago Report
I just realized something. Ressanna and Onyxia never go outside without Leon and/or Fred. Do they use a dragon litter box or something? And will Onyxia develop the ability to share lineage memories with Fred?
Posted by ShadowLurker 10 years ago Report
Third paragraph into this chapter, I make passing mention of what they do... Though the question itself... For some reason I can't help but find it amusing... (dragon litter box)
Right, second question; I can't answer that... Because beyond Chapter 13... The story isn't written yet...
Posted by playafreek 10 years ago Report
how's part 13 commin along?
Posted by playafreek 10 years ago Report
ShadowLurker, I just listened to the 'Troubles of a Dragon Owner' series and feel that you need to get Learner's permission to reintroduce the white shadow to your story. Nick saving Lyn's hatchling in that story triggered a change that your story seems to reflect upon. I would say to show Nina again, but thanks to Emily and Ash that's not necessary.