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It is a very dark evening for two noble girls in Meltokio, not knowing that they're about to end up as food for a very hungry ninja summonor.
Disclaimer: The places and characters of Tales of Symphonia belong to NAMOC Tales. The two female characters belong to me. Thank you
A/N: Sorry that it took long to upload this new story but I was distracted and needed the drive to do so. Anyways here it is and I hoped that you all enjoy it.
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Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
I found the story enjoyable.
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
I found the story enjoyable.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 10 years ago Report
This was a sudden surprise and one that I really like. I think this might be your best story so far, though I haven't reread any of your previous stories starring Sheena in a while. I should fix that.
Anyway, I liked the multiple perspective switches that happened throughout the piece, thought it was nice. I wondered if you were trying something new in the story by doing that. The only other thing I can say it was a nice, short, and concise read.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 10 years ago Report
Well, that's exactly what happens when I'm not stressed man. But seriously it just came to me for when I written this piece. I'm glad that the perspective switches are received well and hoped to do more like this one time.
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Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 10 years ago Report
You know what would go great for perspective switches? A story where you set up two preds against each other and keep switching between them until one of them devours the other... or even introduce a third pred in the middle of it all. I could be wrong on that though.
Regardless, I'm glad to see this is your best. Not to say your other stories aren't, but this is pretty good. Talking with you really reminds me I have a story of my own to get done and post on the forums one day.
Posted by NewRebellion 8 years ago Report
I love Sheena. Too bad there isn't more of her on this site.