I see... Great improvement ...But the pose really kills the picture...
So here's my advice:
Watching at this pose with the extremities position completely symetrical and the enormous difference with your recent pictures makes me think you probably used a pose reference program or a wooden mannequin as a reference for drawing this
If that's the case then it's ok, it's great in fact !!! it is a completely valid way of sketching and it will probably help you grasp better how to use poses and proportions !!...
Regardless if you're using a poser program or not I have to advice against the use of such RIGID poses
That pose looks completely rigid and unnatural...
If you did it by your own hand, then try to sketch a more natural pose when sketching;
If you're using a pose refference program or a wooden mannequin as reference, then try to work a little more on the pose before you start drawing
:
... It looks too small... the stomach and intestines should be at least twice that big... it looks like you used reference for this too; I like that !!! But try using better reference next time ! example: http://www.cancer.gov/images/cdr/live/CDR415499-274.jpg
Yes I used a pose reference program and it looks better in proportions but I'm not satisfied with this kind of drawing :/
That's why I will go back to draw my work by my own hand. I think it'll not look that 'good' again but I want to improve my skills and give you art I#m happy with! (:
You're welcome !!
And if you're so eager to improve your skills then I'll be dropping by to give you advice everytime I see you post a picture.
Also, I agree: it is important to be able to sketch on your own, but remember posers are great for the most difficult poses; I use them myself sometimes for studying the most difficult poses ! ^_^
And I use drawing wooden mannequins for reference occasionally as well
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
I see... Great improvement ...But the pose really kills the picture...
So here's my advice:
Watching at this pose with the extremities position completely symetrical and the enormous difference with your recent pictures makes me think you probably used a pose reference program or a wooden mannequin as a reference for drawing this
If that's the case then it's ok, it's great in fact !!! it is a completely valid way of sketching and it will probably help you grasp better how to use poses and proportions !!...
Regardless if you're using a poser program or not I have to advice against the use of such RIGID poses
That pose looks completely rigid and unnatural...
If you did it by your own hand, then try to sketch a more natural pose when sketching;
If you're using a pose refference program or a wooden mannequin as reference, then try to work a little more on the pose before you start drawing
:
... It looks too small... the stomach and intestines should be at least twice that big... it looks like you used reference for this too; I like that !!! But try using better reference next time ! example: http://www.cancer.gov/images/cdr/live/CDR415499-274.jpg
Posted by Satay 10 years ago Report
Haha wow thanks for a ton of new devices :3
Yes I used a pose reference program and it looks better in proportions but I'm not satisfied with this kind of drawing :/
That's why I will go back to draw my work by my own hand. I think it'll not look that 'good' again but I want to improve my skills and give you art I#m happy with! (:
Yeah again thank you and I will give my best!
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
You're welcome !!
And if you're so eager to improve your skills then I'll be dropping by to give you advice everytime I see you post a picture.
Also, I agree: it is important to be able to sketch on your own, but remember posers are great for the most difficult poses; I use them myself sometimes for studying the most difficult poses ! ^_^
And I use drawing wooden mannequins for reference occasionally as well
Posted by Satay 10 years ago Report
That'd be great!
A wooden mannequin is a good idea by the way! :D
I hope someday I will be as good as you! \"o"/
I can't say it often enough: THANK YOU! :D
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
You're welcome, I hope you improve a lot as well !! I'll be looking forward to your next picture !
Posted by TinyHero 10 years ago Report
Wow...
Posted by Satay 10 years ago Report
Is something wrong? :p
Posted by TinyHero 10 years ago Report
Oh nothing... -_-