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Violet gets idea and after picking her players, she begins her game.
->Ch.1 Mournful Calling (http://aryion.com/g4/view/296745)
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Posted by mojo-2131285 10 years ago Report
Pretty good start. I'll read the rest as soon as I have time. Your predator is the right combination of cute and cruel.
I added f/f and f/m in tags. I think the lack of these is why you don't have many comments yet. I definitely know that f/whatever is the first thing I look for when deciding if I want to check out a story.
Posted by Lophane 10 years ago Report
ah... hmm... good point, is it f/f&m?
not really sure what it would be
Posted by mojo-2131285 10 years ago Report
The more tags the merrier, I say. But I would definitely put f/f and f/m on all the stories. Theirs a bunch of people who will just click on a tag that says "fav pred/whatever," and look through what pops up. It'll get you more views.
Also, since the series and you as an author are new, why not start a "Lophane's story announcement thread" or something? It'll get your view count up.
Posted by Lophane 10 years ago Report
I'm not in the habit of making a thread like that... seems almost rude to put something like that up when its just advertising, but if its okay, i might
But i'll definitely do the tags