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A Fennekin was out in a forest to enjoy the day. She found a berry tree and decided to grab a snack for herself; however, that ended up to be the worst decision of her life.
The first chapter of another short series I came up with. This time with some Pokemon. Hope you enjoy.
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Posted by saintheartwing 10 years ago Report
I LOVE this story! It's effectively written, has good detail, we feel for the main character, AND the twist at the end makes it really heartwarming. It's a good departure from the usual modus operandi of work on the site. Faved!
Posted by Omega_Code 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much! :) I'm glad you enjoy it, and thanks for the fav! Share the link with others if you like. The more view the better, heh.
Posted by hidragon 10 years ago Report
I didn't expect the serperior to have a trainer.
I agree with the snake it is a silly rule.
Um why did you change scolipede to megapede then back to scolipede?
Posted by Omega_Code 10 years ago Report
The same reason why I went back and forth in call the Serperior with snake or grass snake. To not make it repetitive in the description of either of them. Scolipede is its official name while megapede is it species name.