Hi, I've come to deliver both praise and an ugly thing that bothers me.
You're great at drawing adorable characters. Whenever I look at one of your pictures there's usually something that makes me go go "d'awww". You also seek improvement. A true willingness to improve with extensive practice will bring you great improvement in short time.
I have a serious issue with her right tit. It looks like an old granny tit got deflated. As a lover of fine boobs, I want to wage war on it. Please draw her boob nice and round next time.
Her expression looks strange. Maybe it was intended but she looks completely neutral. I'm not seeing any emotion in her eyes or mouth. If she just ate a delicious person larger than herself I'd think she would have some sort of expression unless she's a robot. Expression aside, her mouth looks a bit wonky with the way its opening up so wide just to talk in a relaxed pose.
Well just prioritize drawing them a lot and make minor adjustments each time you'll be drawing hella better stuff. Probably week-to-week you'll draw them noticeably better. How often would you say you dedicate time to practicing drawing characters per week?
Posted by mouth111 9 years ago Report
Hi, I've come to deliver both praise and an ugly thing that bothers me.
You're great at drawing adorable characters. Whenever I look at one of your pictures there's usually something that makes me go go "d'awww". You also seek improvement. A true willingness to improve with extensive practice will bring you great improvement in short time.
I have a serious issue with her right tit. It looks like an old granny tit got deflated. As a lover of fine boobs, I want to wage war on it. Please draw her boob nice and round next time.
That is all. Keep up the good work.
Posted by night22 9 years ago Report
Thank god for criticism and not praise. Thanks man, 'ill try to fix that asap. I'm terrible at drawing tits.
Any other flaws you might have noticed?
Posted by mouth111 9 years ago Report
Her expression looks strange. Maybe it was intended but she looks completely neutral. I'm not seeing any emotion in her eyes or mouth. If she just ate a delicious person larger than herself I'd think she would have some sort of expression unless she's a robot. Expression aside, her mouth looks a bit wonky with the way its opening up so wide just to talk in a relaxed pose.
Hope that helps.
Posted by night22 9 years ago Report
Oh yeah, the mouth was a huge problem i had. It doesnt looke like it's in a natural position
Posted by mouth111 9 years ago Report
Well just prioritize drawing them a lot and make minor adjustments each time you'll be drawing hella better stuff. Probably week-to-week you'll draw them noticeably better. How often would you say you dedicate time to practicing drawing characters per week?
Posted by night22 9 years ago Report
I draw non-vore usually once a week, but lately i've been doing one a day each night.
Posted by mouth111 9 years ago Report
That's a good pace I think. 10+ hours of practicing anything a week and you'll see week to week improvements. I look forward to seeing more from you!
Posted by night22 9 years ago Report
Thanks!