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Here is the final page. A whole page dedicated to just a half-line of the "poem". But it is the most important half-line!

Originally the last two lines were:

"I'm very sorry sir, but we're full and lack a bed"
The grizzly bear grows angry, and now Andy lacks a head!

But I changed it around so that we can get this lovely scene!

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Syndrome

Posted by Syndrome 9 years ago Report

I admit, I am quite envious of Andy and his lovely bear induced fate! There are a few nights here and there when I hope to see something large and hungry standing at my desk looking for a room when I am sold out! <:3

Love the verse of course! I have to do some more cute little vore rhymes myself.

Fishmouth

Posted by Fishmouth 9 years ago Report

Yes, the occupation does seem to lend itself to such a possibility! I will have to come up with a good scenario for cubicle folks like myself...

Have you ever had to walk someone with a reservation when the hotel was already at 100%? When I was reading a hotel management book I was surprised it was encouraging overbooking as a necessity for every successful hotelier.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the verse! I look forward to your own, as your potential for poetic prowess is promising!

Syndrome

Posted by Syndrome 9 years ago Report

Maybe a cubical mate getting a wee bit peckish before lunch decides to snack on a few coworkers? :3 Bears need jobs too!

Only a few times. We are pretty good at not over booking. It's usually a third party booking like Expedia or Priceline that screw us. And those we can't walk because the technically are not booked with us. They are just out the money. :/ Most my problems stem from walk ins. They never want to accept you are sold out. And that is how I die. Hungry monster comes in, I have no room, and all they ever find of me are my shoes and saliva coated tie. D:

Heh-heh! I'm thinking of a little one about my mousy botanist David becoming brunch for one of his plants.

Fishmouth

Posted by Fishmouth 9 years ago Report

Ha, yes! "Where's the accounts payable department?" "They've taken a permanent lunch break..."

Wow, I'd hate to be in that Expedia/Priceline situation. It seems like there is a tense and complicated relationship between hotels and online booking sites.

Well, I hope your tie doesn't end up in some monster's trophy cabinet anytime soon. I will miss your lovely sketches on hotel stationary! But perhaps if a rather irritable human walks in when you are filled you can direct him to the room of a monster whose already checked in. The hotel will be happy for the double occupancy, and the monster will likely give you a big tip in the morning to thank you for the room service.

Yes! A rhyme about David and his man-eating plant would be fantastic :D

Syndrome

Posted by Syndrome 9 years ago Report

>:3

There is at some times. Mostly it runs smoothly, it's every now and then I'm ready to freak out on someone there.

XD Both concepts work for me! >:3

:3 I've got one as of now, just need to doodle it up!

DressedforDinner

Posted by DressedforDinner 9 years ago Report

This is quite a nice comic. I like Andy. He is very chipper and fun to see as a recurring victim of vore. I've seen several artists have characters they have as chew toys in good fun, such as Syndrome, Shaggi, and Supergenji.

Fishmouth

Posted by Fishmouth 9 years ago Report

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like to see Andy and his misadventures. I have a long history drawing him.

Although in the next one I was thinking of having Eddie end up being the unfortunate one. Eddie and Andy are like Abbott & Costello, Timon & Pumbaa, etc. Eddie's not quite as chipper as Andy.

I do like seeing regular characters in other artists too!

DressedforDinner

Posted by DressedforDinner 9 years ago Report

You're welcome.

I see. Eddie seems like he'd be a cathartic prey.

Bright

Posted by Bright 9 years ago Report

What a nice beargut.

Fishmouth

Posted by Fishmouth 9 years ago Report

Thank you! This was my first sort of "traditional" vore sequence ending with a big belly, so I wasn't sure how it would go over. So I'm glad you like it!