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Alex returns from her trip and Cassie has some trouble with her first 'voluntary' client.

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Squall

Posted by Squall 9 years ago Report

This is an example of a great story. Fleshed out, settings described well, even backstory and character angst. A "little" more description about the act itself wouldn't hurt, and potential for continuation with the main character coping with internal issues could lead to problems in future episodes. This gets two thumbs up from me. Thank you, sir.