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A small independent diner comes under real scrutiny when a critic with a terrifying reputation arrives...

Neat commission here, that i very much enjoyed writing. Please share thoughts below!

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Sora

Posted by Sora 9 years ago Report

Well done ! Very nice story !

ironman362

Posted by ironman362 9 years ago Report

Holy shit that was awesome! Especially love when she's dragging her belly in front of him

Thanatos2k

Posted by Thanatos2k 9 years ago Report

Al Capone getting arrested for tax evasion

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 9 years ago Report

This story made me cry...that woman was cruel T_T
poor tara.

LillyBells

Posted by LillyBells 9 years ago Report

Poor Tara shouldn't have died tho... what's her husband gonna do now...his sister, wife and two UNBORN children were killed...