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Kosuzu decides to head to the Garden of the Sun on a whim, with a concerned Keine following her. Just what awaits them, I wonder?
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Posted by Oaky 9 years ago Report
OH OH, I wasn't expecting Mokou at all! What a kickass surprise.
As usual, I enjoy your writing a lot! Mmm, might suggest you give it another read, as I spotted about two mistakes you might have missed ("the skirt of the skirt", for instance! ).
Looking forward to part two. o(≧∇≦o)!
Posted by Aqualite 9 years ago Report
There's almost always something I never catch in editing, thanks XD
And I'm glad you liked it! For those of you upset that Yuuka wasn't hands on here.... you'll be pleasantly surprised <3
Posted by Oaky 9 years ago Report
Oh oh, I also wanted to point that I loved how it makes a slight mention to your other story (by saying Reimu was busy helping Marisa with an experiment. )
HOW COULD I FORGOT TO ADD THIS. AAH.
Posted by Aqualite 9 years ago Report
Hehehehe, I just had to sneak that in there~. Yep, she was too busy being in Marisa's belly~.
Posted by MotherOfMonsters 6 years ago Report
Omg.
I live for this
Malicious
Demonic
Parasol toting
Plant mom. <3
Posted by Aqualite 6 years ago Report
I really should get to that part 2 one day. ^^