Posted by bobthebuilder111 9 years ago Report

Loving this so much already haha. I remember being so surprised (in a very good way), when you threw in the TG near the end of Cooked on a cruise, which for me made the story go from "pretty good" to "hell yes." And I had wished it had showed up more, but looks like my unspoken hopes/wishes will be fulfilled here. Which is actually even better because its a whole new location and context. Since in Cooked you had covered the scenario pretty thoroughly.

But yea even if TG isnt most peoples cup of tea (let alone even more niche TG/bondage/vore and or death), it still was an extremely nice surprise to see you go back to that world. I think you are the only author I know of that hit that niche now that I think about it. And this is easily the highlight of my day so far (which is a bad thing when I think about it lol) And if its not stupid obvious by this point I am very eager to see more.

I am kind of surprised though that a female-to-male rod would even be introduced/made by the grenoils. It would seem counter productive since they only go after females. Actually, now that I think about it you never said who actually made them, but the fact that they work on contact from ANY part of the rod with humans implies it was very unlikely to have been made by humans.

And I have digressed long enough I think.

TLDR: Love it, looking forward to more (just curious actually, how long were you thinking of making this story?)

Posted by KavenBach 9 years ago Report

The grenoils, though they eat women, strive to at least APPEAR civilized; to me, having a TG rod to revert females to males stems from that to begin with. Either way, both are equally easy for them to produce, so why not? And, if they're looking to sell the things to other races, it just makes sense, methinks, to sell them as a set. Just the potential for personal fun for couples would be a selling point. :)

There are two.more segments of this done, both written on my cellphone (like this reply, in fact).

Posted by giblieherps 9 years ago Report

I am thrilled and so excited to see you posting a new story. I cant wait to see where you go. Personally i love youe soft vore more than anything else, but i eagerly await the mind games that make your stories some of my favorites in the genre. The tg dominance mind games and fear have me drooling, I swear to goodness i would have a hard time resisting that mtf rod and finding a grenoil to fuck me and swallow me whole.

Glad to have more of you :)

Posted by Jamie263 9 years ago Report

Very hot. I look forward to the rest of it.

Posted by Jamie263 9 years ago Report

I love this concept. I sometimes fantasize about what it be like to be turned into a woman and get dominated. This story was a massive turn on.