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Part three, all I have written in this series to date. After putting Erin at risk of being devoured, Varin brings her back to his quarters. It's time for her to decide... one female orgasm in exchange for becoming his SlaveGirl? Or to get changed back without ever experiencing sex as a woman?
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Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Ironic ending. Worth it. Worth ALL of it.
Posted by Jamie263 9 years ago Report
Nice twist at the end. Brilliant read.
Posted by temporos 9 years ago Report
Sent two female ones, eh? I wouldn't be surprised if that Galupados merchant was waiting right outside the compound with his own slavers about now.
Posted by bobthebuilder111 9 years ago Report
Once it started to get close to the end I definitely started to wonder if it would turn out something like that lol. One thing though that I am not sure if it was on purpose or not, but even with them both changed they will be perfectly fine since you gave them a escape in the form of the set of Free women's robes in the cupboard in chapter 2. So he just leaves a note saying he is taking a brief vacation/sick time, call customer support so exchange one, then throw on the robes and just walk out lol.
This one was also a LOT tamer than your other ones in that universe (not a bad thing, just observation). She got off super easy, lot of teasing and threats, but only got.... "manhandled" once, in the last wind-down to the end.
Posted by bobthebuilder111 9 years ago Report
O yea, and I definitely liked it. Hope to see more at some point haha
Posted by KavenBach 9 years ago Report
Ha ha... maybe re-read the section about the robes used to free slaves at times. "Sometimes used when setting a slave free, but usually just a cruel joke..."
Still think his men would let her wander off? >:)
Posted by bobthebuilder111 9 years ago Report
Well, I had been under the impression that that is what HE used them for normally (to taunt), not that it wasnt a legitimate indication of freedom lol. But more of a known/legitimate indication of being given freedom (has to happen at SOME point lol), at which the slave girls would be eager to works towards earning it. Then he pulls essentially a "Haha yea I was just kidding no free womens robe for you" kind of deal.
ie, Robes were legit, but he was taunting them with it vs complete bs which he somehow convinced them to believe for some reason would be legit. my interpretation atleast lol
Posted by bobthebuilder111 9 years ago Report
"Sometimes which he* used as a prop to convince a slave that she could be set free, but was just a cruel joke." I think would be better. The fact that you even used the word "sometimes" and "usually" implies its not always. ie, it HAS been used for that purpose to indicate freedom at some point or another, atleast once. Otherwise it would be some kind of absolute, not "sometimes" or "usually." Again, my interpretation lol
Posted by bobthebuilder111 9 years ago Report
And so yes (3rd edit/comment), as it is written, I do think they would let her wander off haha.
Posted by Thanatos2k 9 years ago Report
Great ending
Posted by jewels76 7 years ago Report
Interesting ending. Aren't Aaron/Erin & Varin in a bit of trouble. Without the reversal rod, and being in the slaver compound, aren't they doomed.
Posted by KavenBach 7 years ago Report
Certainly looks that way, doesn't it?
There may eventually be a continuation to this. Not much time for me to write these days... :(