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Alan likes to sleep with succubi, but he doesn't have a lot of money. Don't be like Alan. Avoid being eaten.
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My new thing for this story is casual vore, because I find the juxtaposition of small talk while being digested pretty amusing.
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Posted by Bright 8 years ago Report
A really neat story I say.
I especially like the casual first part of it.
Posted by MPennanti 8 years ago Report
Thanks Bright! I see you've been enjoying my back catalog too. ;)
Posted by JackNoName 8 years ago Report
Nice story, well written, it really shows you took the time to get most spelling errors out, something that lacks in other writers here. Other than a pleasant read I love the different parts in the story, especially how you discribe his different feelings throughout being digested, dieing, ressurected and eventually completly absorbed; very surreal and other-worldly. The balance between the story, the phisical digestion and the more abstract digestion is very well done. Good job!
Posted by MPennanti 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I try to catch all the typos I can, but feel free to comment if you spot some. I'll usually take the time to fix and re-upload. :D
Posted by ryu33813 8 years ago Report
Really like your style of soul vore in your works. Hope you keep on writing!
Posted by MPennanti 8 years ago Report
I don't see soul vore very often, so I try to contribute where I can. :)
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
Neato mic feato!
Posted by TootCore 7 years ago Report
Backstory, lore, vore, some character development... What a delightfully pleasant surprise this story was. Excellent job.
Posted by MPennanti 7 years ago Report
Thanks!