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My eyes hurt so much but I did it. I like Genesis's form here and how Anu came out all well although I couldn't get the background to work. Sorry on that.
So like I said in the previous pic I do believe another page could of been put between this one and the previous one, but it wasn't necessary. I do feel like you guys might think it happened to fast, but she was technically digesting her the whole time. The change afterward was just the body reforming for Genesis. If you do think there should be another pic added let me know.
I will be uploading one more pic after this one acting as an epilogue pic before part 2(really the first pic of it) which I won't be uploading until it is done which I don't know when it will be since Mmaffle will be busy for a while. I just don't like that much of my series have remained unfinished and I'll probably get known for that lol so until it is done no more past that first pic. I have and will be trying hard to complete any series I start.
Any questions on stuff that has happened in the pics go ahead and ask. Nothing I love more than talking about my characters and helping myself learn em as well. I'm not 100 percent happy with Genesis's dialogue, but while her actions I find to be spot on/right I doubt I capture her well in the dialogue. Thankfully Anu doesn't talk or it'd be double as tough lol.
Original artwork by Mmaffle
Colors and shading by xblurp.
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Posted by bichniga 8 years ago Report
Is it just me or has her breasts shrunken from the last page?
Anyway this is pretty good, I like the idea of turning a girl into a slimegirl by digesting her from the inside
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
Her boobies did shrink, but there's are reasons. One is my lack of skill to edit the sketch properly lol, but past that I decided that this form would have her tits not be as large since her body is more dispersed inside of Sarah like in her hair, face, and clothing as well as making her taller. She could easily return them to their bigger size if she wanted tho in this form.
I could still try to edit and make em bigger tho if it's a bother.
I'm glad you like the idea and I hope you like the next page as well.
Posted by Kulimbor 8 years ago Report
Quite good!
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by SSJBura 8 years ago Report
I kinda want there to be an I between page or shot, kinda a last look style
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
I get the in between shot thing, but not 100% sure on what you mean by last look style. If I get like two more peeps who want an in between page I'll commission it up next time Mmaffle is free :) .
Posted by giga_nova 8 years ago Report
an in between page would explain what exactly happened during part 1 page 8 as for her plan that has also caught my attention it makes me wonder what she's planing no that she has the body of a security guard great work by the way as for me not commenting on the last 8 pages I just say them now and want to see part 2 soon but not too soon both characters however or all characters in this series look really attractive you out do yourself often and because your work is unique its harder to find other artists with a unique mind and imagination but most artists like to make the same thing over and over again which is irritating and I speak of the furries
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
You make a good point. I suppose there should be another pic in between for some reasons that I didn't think about until some the comments on here showed me that there is a lapse. I might even add a 2nd pic between pics 1.7 and 1.8 since it may have still happened too fast. And don't worry on the comment thing. I feel I've definitely lost the huge following I used to have, but I hope to win them back! :) . Even if ya just comment on one pic its all good to me. I hope to do part 2 soon as well, but it is a very long segment I have planned and since I don't know when Mmaffle will be able to continue it I can only fiddle my thumbs and wait which does give decent time for me to finish others things as well as save up money from my surveys.
I'm really happy to hear that you enjoy how the characters look. I often have a huge problem deciding on things like their color palette or keeping things consistent, but I am trying to get better at it and I have to thank Mmaffle for giving me the foundation to to make the pics look really nice. My own work is still lacking.
I do try to keep things different with each pic even if it's just a different angle because I do fear that people may bore of the work I present to them if poses, scenes or angles are the same. I do like certain ones though like in the Zone series and will probably repeat them in the future so I hope it's not too much of a bother as well as certain themes.
Posted by giga_nova 8 years ago Report
I wouldn't mind a repeat and thank you for commenting back
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
Mhm :) .