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After a long shift in the hospital Cassie needed to unwind. She just so happened to stumble on the perfect place and find just the right person for her needs.
This is very unusual for me, willing and non fatal. But its good trust me. I enjoyed it and you know I can't read my own stories.
Anyway Cassie belongs to her player. You can find her profile here:
https://rp.aryion.com/profile/Cassie_Priam
Any comments please leave em. I love to read them. Plus favs make me happy ^_^ Toodles.
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Posted by theheadsn 7 years ago Report
always love your writing style and stories. One of the few vore writers that makes me excited to read a new story. Hoping you get some inspiration to write more soon :)
Posted by Straxacore 7 years ago Report
I am very pleased to hear that. I am glad you like my stories so much and I actually have a story written already and just needs posting ^_^ And what did you think of the willing, non-fatal story here?
Posted by Brightguy 7 years ago Report
I liked it, When its non-fatal, willing goes great, Sometimes even unwilling non-fatal would be good if the person is just.. well nervous or thinks they are going to die, but endo things like this where they are just... in there with no digestion are something you don't see very often and I love them! ^^
Posted by Straxacore 7 years ago Report
Well I am super glad you like it. I have another one planned for a few days too :)
Posted by theheadsn 7 years ago Report
i /personally/ like fatal, makes the stakes greater. But if the story is done well anything can be good. The other week I read a very good hard vore story that because it wasnt so detailed, worked really well in my opinion. To each his own for sure. I think all of your stories are good so no complaints from me ha
Posted by Straxacore 7 years ago Report
Thank you so much. That means a lot to me :)
Posted by vasp 7 years ago Report
As somebody who adores non-fatal with a passion, this was amazing! I do like the willing aspect as well, it really goes hand in hand with non-fatal, though unwilling non-fatal has its merits too. Cassie was such a sneak here, but she wasn't caught so I'd say she deserves a good amount of quality time to enjoy her temporary new pet.
Posted by Straxacore 7 years ago Report
She kept her for several days ^_^ And my other non fatal one is unwilling. I am glad you liked this story I have another non fatal one coming soon too
Posted by vasp 7 years ago Report
Oooo, can't wait to read it!
Posted by Circle0Trick 7 years ago Report
This was a nice read. A fun and characterizing story, and a bit of a pleasant surprise.
Thank you very much for writing and posting.
Posted by Straxacore 7 years ago Report
You are welcome and thank you so much for your comment. Means a lot. :) what did you like about it?
Posted by Circle0Trick 7 years ago Report
A few things easily come to mind:
The descriptions seemed to be the perfect length and detail to get clear mental pictures of the scene.
They were both interesting and detailed.
The story itself was nice too.
The plot felt like "This is a random and mostly normal day in Casise's life," and the tone with which you wrote it matched that well.
The rest may simply be because it was well-written overall. Though I don't know the techniques and strategies you used, I know they worked well. It all came together to make a work that is nice to just open up and read through.
Posted by Straxacore 7 years ago Report
Thank you so much. :D that was super nice to hear. And I have No technique. I just write what comes to mind. But your description of my story made me feel great so thank you so much for that. ^_^ It was written to be enjoyed and I'm glad you did.