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i like lillie
Wanted to write this as an excuse to have Lillie getting eaten
I succeeded
also i like burping up clothes
nyxon Nyxon did the preview so everyone go watch her
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Posted by mehtrollmarill 8 years ago Report
Great story, would love a pic to go with it :)
Posted by The K 8 years ago Report
Loved it. I love the trainer girl from Sun and Moon so much. Her design is so adorable. I loved reading her getting a bloated tummy and burping. Loved the parts where she was burping.
Posted by Mid_Night 8 years ago Report
now that is a cute story.
Posted by Draconatedz 8 years ago Report
Awawawawaaaa~
Incredible story! The grand amount of detail, coupled with hitting just about every one of my smaller kinks made for a stunning tale. Belching up clothing is indeed excellent, especially when it leaves them completely nude inside, and a sopping pair of panties splattered atop the predator's round gut.
I'm actually not even sure how I'd like to imagine this one ending. I usually always prefer fatal, but this one was so sweet, I wouldn't mind Lillie making it out in one piece. Though, the allure of chicken-chan accidentally leaving her inside for too long is a delicious fantasy indeed. I think even Lusamine would be floored to see her daughter reduced to an extension of another, if it came to that(or maybe she'd applause her, lol). I think the open ending really helped it out in that regard.
Lastly, you did a good job with Chicken-chan as a self insert style predator. Her not having any spoken dialogue allowed me to imagine it was my own version of her, for example. Seeing the thumbnail, I can see you are a man of taste who picked the delicious brown option, right on!
Posted by KDzee 8 years ago Report
I thought about including a digestion ending but i can't in good faith have Lillie be digested. Maybe I'll do another one with her doing the digesting
I thought about going for just a generic trainer for full self-insert but I vastly prefer F/F so here we are
glad you enjoyed it though, i'll probably include burping up clothes forever because i love it so much
Posted by Draconatedz 8 years ago Report
>Lillie pred
Yes please, preferably her terrible mom as the prey ;)
Posted by MellowYellow 8 years ago Report
My god, Lillie pred sounds "absol"utely amazing.
Posted by HungryScorpion 8 years ago Report
Very sweet and adorable ^^
Posted by hentaiaiai 8 years ago Report
i loved this story, super cute. Lillie is the best gen 7 girl
Posted by Vorelover23 8 years ago Report
I loved this story! Though a quick question, how is Moon (the female player character) going to get Lillie out now? I mean, when you said that Lillie was 'snug' in Moon's belly, it makes it sound like she's trapped. Too bad you cant do an epilouge of Moon's result of what happened to Lillie... Great story though. Keep up the good work!
Posted by Znonymous 8 years ago Report
Wow, that was great. I love the feelings and flirting going on. A follow up with very willing digestion would be awesome. As Lillie seemed very into it.
Hope you do more like this in the future.
Posted by KorinDragoon 8 years ago Report
maybe do a continuation of this where they get to where they need to be Moon lets Lillie out Lillie eats someone like her mom digests her so she'll never leave Lillie again then since both Moon and Lillie enjoyed Moon eating Lillie they do it again and they savor it.
this leads to an epilogue where Lillie spends as much time as she can safely in Moon's belly getting eaten repeatedly and maybe Lillie doing the same to Moon from time to time.
Posted by psychoplayz 7 years ago Report
Hey great story , just wondering does lillie digest or does she eventually let her out. Im curious im not much of a fatal fan so im just asking. Really great story though i loved it
Posted by psychoplayz 7 years ago Report
Great story I liked it a lot. One question how does she get out it said she was snug in there and that the belly fit perfectly around her does she not get out or is she stuck does she get digested at all I just want to know because I'm not much of the Fatal fan but I just want to know great story either way
Posted by Observer702 6 years ago Report
Ooh if you ever change your mind about fhis id love to see an alternate ending :)
Posted by Observer702 6 years ago Report
Great work btw