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I'm trying to figured where I'm fucking up with this. It's definitely the body, but blarghhghghghg. The shoulders, the arms, it just seems like her body doesn't fit on her neck. Regardless wanted to show a small thing on the animation to show I'm still working on it.
I colored this frame just to show to ya guys.
I may have to extend her body out. Widen it maybe? Let me know if ya guys spot what I'm fucking up.
At least she came out kinda nice right?
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Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
Maybe I lack an artist's critical eye, but it look okay to me.
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
I appreciate that lol.
Posted by giga_nova 8 years ago Report
interesting even up close she's hot
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
Glad you think so :)
Posted by saixhinata 8 years ago Report
I think I see what you mean. The hair that goes across her shoulder is only 1 dimension while her head being turned counteracts it, so it gives off the illusion that her neck extends passed where the hair cuts it off. I have no idea how to fix something like that though lol.
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
I'll see what I do on that.That was probably one of the issues.
Posted by saixhinata 8 years ago Report
Oh and this post got me hyped. I simply cant wait to see it!!
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
It should be something for this niche lil community lol. Hopefully.
Posted by bichniga 8 years ago Report
Her hair does look kinda weird. Maybe if you shade the part around her shoulder/neck, it'd look more clear. I'm no artist though, so idk what exactly is wrong and how to fix, but that's just my 2 cents.
Posted by xblurp 8 years ago Report
I haven't decided if I'm going to be shading the animation or not. I've already cut off lots of what I planned due to not liking how it's come out and due to the recent commission I did. Flat coloring is possible tho. I just looked up some references to try and see where I went wrong so hopefully that helps. I imagine the did look weird too.