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It time for miia's payback
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Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
Also, you should start a new paragraph every time a different character speaks.
Posted by TheBlueOne 8 years ago Report
I couldn't help but notice that you started a lot of sentences with "as". good story, but repeating openings get a bit... myeh?
Posted by Nxtguystories 8 years ago Report
Sorry, I was writing it over about two weeks so i guess a lot of that happened as i was remembering reusing word. I will remember that in the future
Posted by SonicV 7 years ago Report
So where's the next part?
Posted by Nxtguystories 7 years ago Report
IN google docs, being written
Posted by vuurdraak249 5 years ago Report
so i gues the next part will never come
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Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
Also, you should start a new paragraph every time a different character speaks.
Posted by TheBlueOne 8 years ago Report
I couldn't help but notice that you started a lot of sentences with "as". good story, but repeating openings get a bit... myeh?
Posted by Nxtguystories 8 years ago Report
Sorry, I was writing it over about two weeks so i guess a lot of that happened as i was remembering reusing word. I will remember that in the future
Posted by SonicV 7 years ago Report
So where's the next part?
Posted by Nxtguystories 7 years ago Report
IN google docs, being written
Posted by vuurdraak249 5 years ago Report
so i gues the next part will never come