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Here is finally the translation of my third vore story.
Basically it's a cross-over between the Lion King, and the Lion and the Mouse tale.
To be honest, I'm more satisfied of this story than the second one. I think I managed to keep a bit of humor and I really like that.
If you wonder why the mouse's name is Kouri, it's because there is another vore character named Koura, who is also a mouse and who appears in an impressing number of full tour works. So it is a little reference ^^
About the character of Scar, I tried to make him as detestable as possible, so that even digestion fans would be happy of what happens.
And yeah, if I wrote anything weird in the text, feel free to correct me. I still have to perfect my english.
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Posted by ButterBelly 4 years ago Report
Wow, Scar fulltour! I wish I knew about this before.
Posted by LightDragon 4 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment ^^
Posted by Omega271 2 years ago Report
"Good. Let me tell you how this is going to happen. I will swallow you one after the other, and it would be better for you to get digested quickly and without any problem, or else I fear I will have to make you suffer to the point this story will receive the “hard vore” tag. Am I clear?"
breaking the 4th wall!