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She did it! Snack managed to defeat one of the hardest bosses of the game, despite the unapproved additions. (Damnit Greg!) With that, she's the strongest being in the village. She also evolved her goblins and have them swear loyalty to her.
More importantly, she got laid! By two women! Not to mention she has a chance at marriage.
Will Karen accept her proposal? Where will Snack go next?
WILL I INCLUDE THE SEX SCENE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
The answer to all questions is...
Maybe.
Took a LONG time to upload this. I've been having computer problems for a week. Also, my first attempt at a fight scene. Not sure if it's any good, but it certainly looked good in my head.
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Posted by Graywolf18 8 years ago Report
Whew, what a chapter! I enjoyed it the whole way through. Gobrins make for rather appealing waifu's from the way you described them, Freya's a bit clingy but the makes her kinda cute. Also, sexually frustrated milf widow... I approve. :)
As for the combat in the chapter, it was well paced and easy to follow. All in all, well done, looking forward to the next. :D
Posted by moeyuri7 8 years ago Report
Thanks! -^^- I was going for that feeling with the goblins, as for Freya I was going for someone childish (when she's actually the oldest one.)
Posted by crushxtreame 8 years ago Report
Plz do all of the above love the series dude i want more
Posted by moeyuri7 8 years ago Report
Thank you! Don't worry, I still have a plan for where the story will go. :D
Posted by crushxtreame 8 years ago Report
Are u going to let the player also eat a girl (non_fatal belly trip or full tour) just to mix things up? Also love the fairy in the ass ending
Posted by moeyuri7 8 years ago Report
Maaaaaaybe
Snack definitely prefers the role of prey, but if someone made her angry enough...
Posted by crushxtreame 8 years ago Report
so hows it hanging?
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
love that ur back dude
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
Is this project stopped?
Posted by moeyuri7 7 years ago Report
No, but everytime I start writing the next chapter I keep changing my mind on how it should end. I have 3 ideas so far, I'll try to pick one soon.
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
Stil stuck?
Posted by moeyuri7 7 years ago Report
Actually, my girlfriend kinda...grounded me from the computer. She doesn't think it's healthy to spend more than an hour on it...
I can't exactly write stories on my phone. I'm using all the time I can get to type, but it's hard to make real progress...
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
tough man well anyways good luck!
Posted by crushxtreame 7 years ago Report
Stil grounded? Hehehe
Posted by lolboy13 8 years ago Report
You tease lol I love it. I would certainly love to see that scene as would a lot of users. This story is taking a wonderful turn that I enjoy reading. Not too much in terms of erotic content aside from some very nice descriptions. Keep this up ^^ Also if I may make a suggestion, maybe have something unaware, more foot stuff, and the bathhouse. (sounds inviting~) But it's your story. So far it's awesome! I already look forward to the next chapter.