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Elle's back and getting used to her powers.
(This novel made as part of NaNoWriMo 2016!)
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I do a lot of die rolls as part of my stories to decide various actions and plot points. Here are the rolls I made for this chapter:
1-2 Anemonites hear, 3-20 Anemonites don’t hear | Results: 8 Anemonites don’t hear
1-5 Elle runs into trouble, 6-20 No trouble | Results: 11 No trouble
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Posted by Forstand 8 years ago Report
A new chapter, yay!
Posted by Graywolf18 8 years ago Report
No more bun babies make Elle quite the confident little lass. :) Props for keeping the continuity as clear as it is, time travel in a lot of other stories I've read tend to get... muddy.
Just for Reference, how many different Elle's were in this chapter? I counted 3?
Posted by Elle 8 years ago Report
Most of her confidence comes from just being in control of her life again. =P I made about three passes over this chapter to make sure it made as much sense as possible. Glad to hear that worked! =3 Sydney doesn't seem to be doing so well in that department though. =P
There were about 4 distinct points in Elle's timeline that were represented here, actually.