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This was a commission for beezo, originally finished 14 March 2017 / Edited and re-uploaded November 2020.
As if working the night shift at a fast food joint wasn't bad enough, a young female manager has the most annoying coworkers - one of which is so insufferable that she absolutely cannot stand him, his slacking, or his lewd comments. Yet in this alternate universe, shrinking technology is the norm, and when Ron accidentally bumps into the fast food's re-sizing machine and shrinks himself, Irish finds the perfect opportunity to solve her co-worker problem once and for all... *by eating him dun dun dunnnnn*
The commission came from a very special person, beezo, who I originally wrote a request for many years ago back before I did commissions. When they approached me for this one, I was super honored to write it! Anyway, I had a lot of fun with it and hope you enjoy it and its gimmicks as well. Have fun!
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Posted by Arbon 7 years ago Report
Well. This was several kinds of amazing.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much ^^ Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by beezo 7 years ago Report
Thank you, very much Halcyon. It is Fantastic I couldn't be happier with it. Turned out really great. :)))))))
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
But of course! I'm very happy you liked it ^^
Posted by ExplosiveWaifu 7 years ago Report
...As expected from the almighty Halcyon. As if making mind-blowing, entertaining games wasn't enough, you also make good stories. Well done. gr8/8
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much ^^ It really does mean a lot! I'm glad you liked it. If there's something in particular you liked about it and would like to see more of as well, feel free to let me know~
Posted by ExplosiveWaifu 7 years ago Report
Disposal needs to be a liiiittle more detailed, but other than that, it's perfectly perfect.
Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report
There's a certain satisfaction of seeing someone get their comeuppance.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Absolutely!
Posted by Eclipseneko51 6 years ago Report
This was a great story i love it and that guy got what he deserved
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
Thank you!! And you think? Personally, I think it was a bit harsh... but a girl's gotta eat, right?
Posted by Lupe 6 years ago Report
Great story! I love the dialogue between the two
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
Thank you! I don't often get complimented on little details like that, so that means a lot to me! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Fizzisop 6 years ago Report
I discovered your page recently and you're a fantastic writer. This story is absolutely perfect for my tastes and it's so rare to see someone do it so well. Really great stuff (and great Akarin pfp).
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
Thanks so much for your kind praise ^^ I'm very glad you enjoyed the story and I hope you enjoy others as well! And thanks for the compliment on the Akarin~
Posted by vyvince1997 5 years ago Report
This is amazing! It begs the question if we vore lovers actually got into a situation like ron, will we react like him or actually will ourselves to get vored?
Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report
Good question! xD
Posted by Whymanamajeff 2 years ago Report
This is such a good story, super well written and I always find myself coming back to it!