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Don't serve dessert before dinner By Lum_the_mad -- Report

Uploaded: 7 years ago

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This story is about a rogue named Amber and how one fateful night after a lengthy romantic encounter with a smooth talking dragon, she offered herself to him as 'dessert'. Little did she know that the dragon Ryu decided she was also going to be his dinner.

Co author is imnotgonnatell.deviantart.com/

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report

Good story, nice pred and prey.

venomousdreams

Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report

Well, time to cut open a dragon.

Lum_the_mad

Posted by Lum_the_mad 7 years ago Report

Amber would greatly appreciate that ^^; She's going to feel so betrayed when she starts digesting.

CookingFamily

Posted by CookingFamily 1 year ago Report

hey, she served herself as his maincourse, can't take it back now ! :p

DR Mabuse

Posted by DR Mabuse 5 years ago Report

Beautiful story:)

therealtrashpie

Posted by therealtrashpie 3 years ago Report

This was a fantasticly wet story. I saw the commissioned comic on devient art and loved it! So i just had to check out the written story for those tasty more detailed extra bits. And I wasn't disappointed. But, there was something a bit off with the ending... Like most rp stories, in this one it seems both players wanted different endings. One wanted the prey character to live and have a happy relationship with the pred. While the other player wants the pred to be cynical and cold. And it just ended up being a very prolonged extended conclusion where the players go back and forth almost in a conflicted argument until one gives up and the story just stops. Outside of that regard, a very good read, for what it's worth coming from someone several years later.

Lum_the_mad

Posted by Lum_the_mad 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much! Admittedly when I was rping this, Amber here was falling HARD for Ryu. She had no idea what was truly in store for her, and I was a little reluctant to have her die. There was also an argument between graphic digestion or not, and in the end we decided to simply end it there.

Also if you liked this, I hoped you also liked the tick tock croc vore I commissioned with Freimgul ;)

therealtrashpie

Posted by therealtrashpie 3 years ago Report

Wait what?! I have not seen that yet! Old tick tock the croc is what got me into vore in the first place. I'll have to hunt that one down unless you have a link?

Lum_the_mad

Posted by Lum_the_mad 3 years ago Report

Part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/592278
Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/592280#item-itself

I have a bit of a running gag with some of my friends that Ilyana turned into a bit of a "gut slut" as one person coined the term.

therealtrashpie

Posted by therealtrashpie 3 years ago Report

Yay, tick tock finally managed to keep that codfish Hook down where he belonged! I see a bunch of easter egg refrence too which is awesome. Very good stuff for sure. And the term "gut slut" is one I've never heard, but is just hilarious and yet pretty accurate to the character I suppose.

Lum_the_mad

Posted by Lum_the_mad 3 years ago Report

Oh! Aaaand here's the sketch that originally inspired it.

https://www.deviantart.com/freimgul/art/Feeding-Tick-Tock-Sketch-Commission-628856536

therealtrashpie

Posted by therealtrashpie 3 years ago Report

Best croc. Lake placid and the croc in L'exercice de l'Etat comes damn close.