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I haven't seen much writing in this time period, so I did something with Bebedora and WW2. Lend-Lease was historically used by the Americans to provide war materiel to the Russians and other allies without needing payment or breaking neutrality; no personnel were ever exchanged.
Of course, I'm taking quite a few liberties with my source material, so please don't be too angry if I got some things wrong along the way. I hope you enjoy!
Bebedora is mine, WW2 is not. Thankfully.
As always, please forgive any formatting errors that live on despite my attempts to slay them. Pesky things.
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Posted by lllll1337 7 years ago Report
Very nice! The setting was very unique, and the tension between Veronika and Bebedora made the conclusion all the more satisfying. The mouthplay was quite nice as well :)
Posted by Nessmk2 7 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report
So just read the dungeon story with Bebedora and then this one. Kind of wondering what the point of a giant mouth at the belly is if she just shrinks them and uses the normal mouth.
In the earlier story the description of the mouth in her belly extending into darkness made me think that she was bigger on the inside and she'd swallow them into her full sized with her larger belly mouth.
But if she's going to shrink them anyway kind of makes the belly mouth pointless.
Still an interesting story though.
Posted by Nessmk2 7 years ago Report
The shrinking happens because the person that I've written these things for likes micro/macro. I like same-size just as much myself, but the requester didn't.
I am sorry that you feel that the belly-maw is pointless, though; she still uses it for other things in other ways. Plus, it's just part of who Bebedora is. I feel that just because she doesn't use it for swallowing them every time (rest assured, she DOES use it quite a bit) doesn't invalidate its existence any more than someone doing UB invalidates their mouth or other bits they don't use in that particular scene. The requester particularly likes nice long throats, and the one that leads from her maw to her belly is quite short; a small concession to physics in a girl that doesn't make a ton of biological sense, I admit.
Thank you very much for your comment and for reading the story, I hope you enjoyed it and the other things I have posted. I'll probably get around to posting another story where there's a bit more 'maw focus' at some point.