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Please tell me if you think I'm too wordy or if I stretched the story too long to get to the steamy part!
Next I'll post the idea thread that will have numerous ideas on where this story will go. I'd love it if you guys can contribute your own ideas :D
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Posted by GeneralUrist 7 years ago Report
Don't worry, it gets to the steamy part fast enough! This one has a lot less "dead wood" at the start. Also, nice to see you've got thumbnails! Who made them?
O ho ho, partly transparent skin and muscle? That is CERTAINLY going to take her far, if it allows people to see stuff inside her. Probably not very biologically possible, but still cool.
Now, and I believe Dr. Alex7711 can back me up, there are four main orfices: The vagina, the anus, the mouth, and the urethra (peehole). We've done stuff with the first too, we should do some stuff with the latter two as well! (Object Swallowing soon? ;) )
I'm curious what ideas others will have. I can think of individual "stunts", but not much as to the general direction the story will flow.