Posted by rugli 7 years ago Report

Well, is this your first or at least your first vore story? Whathever the case is I must say the story is very well written. I love the casual tone at the start and how inconsequential the whole thing is. I mean Adam did go with the flow even if it did have some consequences for him in the end. Tara seems to know this and the he's relly silly guy letting her do this to him with such an ease without actually asking his premison. As I ponder what his reaction would have been if she had asked him before hand. But I must say I would have loved more conversion between the two when he was completely inside her tummy, even if the story did go the whole digestion route. As I personally think endo can happen before digestion. But I must assume that you only like fatal vore without reformation but I have to wonder if Adam were to be reformed if he could live with himself given that he fell for her trick. If I was him I don't know if I could life with myself knowing that I had fallen for it previously. Its always changes that he would fall for it again. But then again would I assume it was 1 trip only given the list Tara has with names of pepole she's drooling over eger to put into her hungry Tummy I did love to know if she does eat both men and women. As I did love see more of Tara in the future :)

Posted by gigaderpbreak 7 years ago Report

Glad to see you liked it! I've written other fetish stories before, but this is my first vore story. Reformation would be a fun angle to tackle, but I felt like normal digestion would be better for this story. If I write another story I'll definitely consider using Tara again.