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Xyr and the Home Invaders By shabbacabba -- Report

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A snippet of the lives of Connor Grier and his alien paramour, Xyr.

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minasan

Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report

This was very excellent for a first story here. I hope to see more of these characters.

I very rarely see stories where the prey is struggling a lot inside the pred, but I always enjoy them.

I also like when the pred has someone they'll never eat, one that even cooperates in feeding people to them.

shabbacabba

Posted by shabbacabba 7 years ago Report

Thanks man, I'm glad you liked it. These two are my flagship characters, you'll probably be seeing more of them. And hopefully my writing will improve over time as well.

True partnerships between a pred and a significant other (or even friend) that is not a pred are so rare and I do not know why. These characters were an effort on my part to try and fill that particular niche.