I did like this, but I preferred your other ones where the person turned into a cock has awareness still and some degree of communication. Them being turned completely inanimate isn't as interesting to me.
Though it's also weird that the ditto ran away when it was presumably her pokemon for some time before this. Also could have provided a nice target to try the new cock out on.
As with the other stories, I'd likely keep her conscious if I were to continue this. Since I thought of this as a one-off, I decided to not be explicit either way. Thanks for the feedback!
I do like your CTF stories. I read them all, even if I don't comment on them all. Though I like the ones that are better for the person that becomes the cock. Things like being able to control the cock at least.
I look forward to further stories.
I think the Ditto could have been a lot of fun though.
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
It's always a pleasure reading your works and this one is no exception. :)
Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report
I did like this, but I preferred your other ones where the person turned into a cock has awareness still and some degree of communication. Them being turned completely inanimate isn't as interesting to me.
Though it's also weird that the ditto ran away when it was presumably her pokemon for some time before this. Also could have provided a nice target to try the new cock out on.
Posted by ArtixLV 7 years ago Report
As with the other stories, I'd likely keep her conscious if I were to continue this. Since I thought of this as a one-off, I decided to not be explicit either way. Thanks for the feedback!
Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report
I do like your CTF stories. I read them all, even if I don't comment on them all. Though I like the ones that are better for the person that becomes the cock. Things like being able to control the cock at least.
I look forward to further stories.
I think the Ditto could have been a lot of fun though.
Posted by ArtixLV 7 years ago Report
I've gotten just that ready to be posted, but I figured I'd stagger the postings.
Posted by Hemkojima 6 years ago Report
Would you like a comic book adaptation?