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After she finishes shopping with her team Velvet head's back to Beacon and overhears a plan to destroy the Academy and kill one of her friends.
So she decides to remove the threat.
I hope you all enjoy this story.
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Posted by Kismet 6 years ago Report
I loved this story
Posted by SwordkingX5 6 years ago Report
Thanks so much.
Glad you liked it.
Posted by acrylic 5 years ago Report
The story overall is great l. Your writing skill and how you put charactets into use and how you exploit unbirth all good.
The only thing i didnt like was that velvet doesnt really fit for an forceful pred due to her weak, coward nature, not that I like kind pred.
Posted by acrylic 5 years ago Report
For example the reverse role could have been better as Cinder is a perfect forceful, wicked pred.