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Stuffed Siren By veender -- Report

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The companion piece to the latest commission I got from  Ergos!

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torontofan

Posted by torontofan 6 years ago Report

LOVE. LOVE. LOVE. this story

veender

Posted by veender 6 years ago Report

I'm glad to hear it! Any particular reasons why, though?

torontofan

Posted by torontofan 6 years ago Report

The back story of the characters was well drawn out, not taking away from the story, but enough to give us (the readers) a feel for the setting. Word choice was excellent, along with the descriptive writing for all scenes. Not just the swallowing or belly scenes, but the lighting, the softness of her voice, the look on the characters faces, (I also have a soft spot for burps), and everything just flowed from one sentence to the next. Look forward to more!

veender

Posted by veender 6 years ago Report

Well then worry not, for there shall be more (eventually)! :D