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I've been trying to upload this story for what seems like forever, but this ought to tide you guys over until my big project is unveiled. This is just a short story, pretty basic.
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Posted by rugli 7 years ago Report
This was a wonderful little read I thought, its kind shame we don't see more stories around with these kind of premise. I must point out there is little bit of error with the bird/birds though it seems to go form pural to singular as it seems like Jacklyn only swallows one bird and that birds eggs. Rather than two birds and their eggs.
I don't know of course if your big project is supposed to be related to this short story if its I will of course look forward to it, as its good warm up as I did love to know what more would be on Lacklyn's menu. If its not then I did like to encore you to consider continue this short story at some point since Jacklyn sounds like an intresting pred by look of it.
But if your big project is unrelated I will stil look forward to it
Posted by ApertureScience 7 years ago Report
These stories aren't nearly as popular as more sexual or typical vore but I prefer it in a way. I like the idea of vore being able to happen from a seemingly normal girl in a seemingly normal world. The big project doesn't involve Jacklyn, but it does involve several of the previous girls, though I do have a couple more things planned for Jacklyn, maybe like a prequel. (You can guess what it would be about from the first paragraph of this story) I thank you for your kind words.
Posted by Eclipseneko51 7 years ago Report
Another great story that i really enjoyed
Posted by ApertureScience 7 years ago Report
Thank ya!
Posted by Casdan1492 6 years ago Report
Awesome, I would really like to see more stuff like this!
Comment: egg shells are actually perfectly digestible!
Posted by ApertureScience 6 years ago Report
thank you! and I would like more too. and I had no idea they were digestible! pretty neat
Posted by Casdan1492 6 years ago Report
You are very welcome, hehe. And yeah, even vinegar can dissolve egg shells, so just imagine gastric juices:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rIN-5Worgm0
Two days is a lot. Maybe that's needed to create the "rubber egg". I'm sure the shell could be dissolved in much less time.