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One day as you were waking up. You hear a knock on the door and discover someone left you a gift at the door.
A short cyoa that comes with... Idk... Pft... 4 endings? Ish?...
Basically this is one of the stories I said I'm writing to practice writing up a bunch of choices that change parts of the story... I threw in everything I could think of... I mean I only committed 4 hours to write it so I didn't throw in everything... Next time I'm just going to stick with 1 gender... Still got to practice this doe...
Also I didn't put in a player gender since some people were asking what I wrote them like... I guess like this.
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http://www.mediafire.com/file/j1njshv2buvjg6w/Overly%20Loving%20Pet.html
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Posted by zeek175 7 years ago Report
Definitely one of my favorites. It's great. <3
Posted by azulookami 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. Easy to write while a nightmare, for me, to edit.
Posted by Smb64 7 years ago Report
ummm.... where's the unbirth and cock-vore? can't seem to get to it...?
Posted by zeek175 7 years ago Report
I found the cock vore by making him all lovey-dovey and then refusing his soft vore advances.
He gets too horny and just shoves you in.
Posted by zeek175 7 years ago Report
Choosing to push against him was one that I remember for sure procced it.
Posted by wolfkiller24 7 years ago Report
dont bite back at the pet and then push against them
Posted by azulookami 7 years ago Report
Like they said, and for herms, depends if you gave hir cuddles or not for cv or ub.
Posted by t4capt 7 years ago Report
I'd love for there to be a CV version for you to be the pred.
Otherwise! it's fantastic!
Posted by azulookami 7 years ago Report
Glad you like like.
I was honestly thinking about it putting in cv and ub for the player, but then I would of had to add a gender option for the player. And I was already reaching my limit, on how much stuff I had to put in everywhere that changes the story.
Maybe when I get better at tracking these kind of things I can add more options... Or if gender options weren't such a huge thing that requires a lot more attention than something like body type.
Posted by BatfinK16 7 years ago Report
This is such a great idea. I love interactive stories so much.
I'd love to see more interaction for the player. Like gender, species and different types of vore. Along with how the players gender might affect the character (animal) they have.
Also would like to see more exploration and scenes between the character and player character. Like going out places, fooling around.
I'd suggest looking at vore comics for insperation for different stuff.
But right now this is a dream idea. I can play it on my phone and it's consistent writtening as only one person wrote it, which is why a lot of interactive stories fall short for me.
Keep up the good work.
Posted by azulookami 7 years ago Report
Thanks.
I feel you on the different people writing for one interactive/cyoa. I tend to lose interest as well.
I wouldn't mind doing something like this again but bigger, but that's a lot of work. Maybe when I have more free time, or get commissioned to do something like that. Though I already have an idea of what I want to do...
Writing it wouldn't take that much time, but it's all the choices that takes up all your time. xD
Posted by BatfinK16 7 years ago Report
If you need a hand I could help writing up the different choices if you tell me what needs doing.
Posted by azulookami 7 years ago Report
Hmmm... I think I would have to spend time to teach about the type and how to write macros and code for the style I'm using first. It's not very fun work, and I can't really say if it will be hard or not for you.
Hard for me since I had to learn and search up everything myself. Not that I wouldn't mind teaching and writing up something with someone else. Always wanted to.
Posted by BatfinK16 7 years ago Report
Well PM on the site sometime and we can sort something out.