Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report

Hey Nobodyman, it's good to see this new chapter of yours up and running. It's something that I've been waiting to read up on and is on time too given the stress I've been going through. I know it leads to Demi's part of this story but now lets see how Tiama deals with her mad older sister. So on with the review.

I've got to say that out of five Goddesses, Tiama certainly did not want to make it easy on Kalia. Going as far as unleashing a massive monsoon on Kalia despite the four powers she's gain to creating a massive tidal wave, this sooo kicks major butt. Though unfortunately Kalia was just powering on through just to sock it right at Tiama's face.

But that said Kalia did think that she was on top of the world what with having eaten four of the goddesses and overpowering Tiama. Though got to say that Kalia's character here was especially sadistic especially when it comes before eating the water goddess. Knocking her down on her pride and stripping her while also licking and KISSING her is about sadistic as you'd expect. A bit graphic but fitting considering it's Kalia's way of trying to enjoy the taste of her last meal.

Though Tiama got some payback in the form of her water streams being shoved down Kaila's throat! Though got to admit that it was quite unexpected move for Tiama to do so but a nice move. Forcing Kalia to swallow so much of her water until she bursts was what I THOUGHT but Taima has something else in mind...forcing Kalia to spit out her sisters with her water. Man, was Kalia both surprised and upset at this turn of events. Taima almost had succeeded in her plan if Kalia hasn't countered quickly. Boy after that attack as well as vomiting up gallons of water out of her, Kalia was mad.

Though the following pages near got me thinking of her as a complex character than I thought. Okay first she was power hungry(literal and otherwise), then prideful and confident, then surprised and now livid. Well, angry more like for when she beat up Tiama to a pulp before finally devouring her like the rest of her sisters. After getting the final element, it would seem she would be rather pleased to get the element of Creation...only to find out she never had it. And boy was she really angry then...but soon turned scared.

It got me so interested to think that after her bravdo and confidence in eating all five of her sisters(including being mad at Tiama for her stunt) she would be suddenly scared. That entity that is the black mass seemed to scare her stiff to the point of stopping her rant. From its inaudiable sounds of anger it was enough to send Kalia into a fright. Despite all the great power she's amassed in her belly, she's scared of the creature, whatever that may be. Anyways once settled down, the creature helped her and she seemed back to her usual self once finding out what her sisters had done.

All in all this chapter certainly showed how determined both Kalia and Tiama are. Mostly for the latter in buying time with Demi. It was a fight that sorta reminded me a bit of the classic animation series of Avatar: The Last Airbender. Mostly with how you described Tiama's use of the water. But now I look forward to see what Demi would be doing once she reaches Aganon...and how she'll deal with Kalia when the time comes. I would say this that Kalia would be very hard to beat now that she has all of the elements on her side. So hope to see more of your work then, NB!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Posted by rotta287 2 years ago Report

Oh my, using the vore against someone to beat them up with waterbending is very creative.

Posted by Nobodyman 2 years ago Report

Thanks!