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Back with a new one! Thanks again to Grimmahr for his help in the chapter!
This one is tamer than the previous one, but I hope everyone likes it!
Also, feel free to suggest or request what you would like to see.
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Posted by Niggle 7 years ago Report
Huh just found this story and seems pretty good, enjoying your writing and the overall plot so far.
As far as suggestions go maybe have them try and offset the danger when they're shrunk with various spells or items that have interesting side effects?
For instance they find some spell or item that makes them immune to crushing damage and/or suffocating which they'd almost certainly want...but then it turns out that the 'immune to being crushed' part is caused by them flattening out under enough pressure and them ending up 2d like a cartoon character, which makes it much easier for them to get stuck or go unnoticed when someone does step on them or crush them.
Things like that.
Anywho looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted by KentaRyu 7 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! Very glad to see you're enjoying it.
I'll look into adding flattening to the story, I like it too. Thanks for the suggestion.
The next chapter should still take a bit but it'll come!