The champ realises his mistake, and turns around. Elly's poor small intestine is no match for him. She doesn't know what's happening, but the distressed gurgles and pain tell her it's not good...

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Had a random idea, decided to try drawing it. Not particularly pleased with the results, especially the first two pages, but it's all practice!

Criticism/advice welcome.

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