Uploaded: 6 years ago
Views: 4,260
File size: 85.00 KiB
MIME Type: application/rtf
Comments: 4
Favorites: 28
Withania is teaching her new friend Epoch, a deer from the Thickett kingdom, about regional flora. Not entirely by accident the conversations turn to fauna, and the two friends discover that one of them has a morbid desire to experience being eaten, and the other has a morbid desire to eat them.
Innocently inexperienced lewd soft vore ensues.
VPG Discord June Writing Jam Entry.
Thanks to resistorserve for letting me borrow Epoch <3
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by Caniption 6 years ago Report
The story was alright, but I could not help but be confused on the tags; doesn't reformation imply fatality? I don't recall fatality being a permanent affair, a prey can reform even with it a component of the story.
Posted by Withania 6 years ago Report
I see what you mean, I was reading a similar discussion on another site about this topic.
For me, Fatal implies perma-death, and if the prey is reformed or otherwise revived it doesn't count. If there's no penalty for death then you didn't really die, ya know?
In the cases of more graphic or cruel vore, I'd say it's a much greyer area, but in Withania's continuity, provided the reformation spell has been used in one form or another it's a no-death situation.
That being said, reformation isn't implied, it's direct, so I'll update that tag!
Posted by Caniption 6 years ago Report
Personally, if I was charged with maintaining tags as a role or something, if I felt the piece didn't conclusively lean this-way or that-way, I would leave the tag out.
What your talking about makes perfect sense if you conclude death as more than physical, but not if you don't.
Hopefully I put my point out there correctly, my head is thinking sideways at the moment.
Posted by Withania 6 years ago Report
That's okay! I think for me the message I want to portray with the tagging is "Is this a Good-End story or a Bad-End story?" because I feel like that's what most people want to know before reading. Generally speaking Reformation means "good end" because everyone ends up being alive.
But yes, thanks for your thoughts, everything is helpful!