Posted by Xaxtern 6 years ago Report

Incredible. I love the irony of her hat too.

Posted by ATailDesired 6 years ago Report

Gotta have your daily protein.

Posted by Shrapnel333 6 years ago Report

This is so good!

Posted by Horoble 6 years ago Report

I don't know where to begin. I guess I should probably say that for a good while now I've been a huge fan of your works as a creator! I've been trying to sort of take "baby steps" into the community, and have really tried to get into the habit of commenting when I can, and truth be told I think I was a little intimidated to do so. Hopefully my being an honest to god month late to commenting on these pieces doesn't take away from anything I have to say, and more importantly, I hope my input can help in some way, whether it being helpful to you as an artist, or just making you smile, aha.

First off, I think I just can't not complement the piece before I get into this. Sadly I'm not well versed in any of your OC's, and really know little to nothing about any of them apart from the really obvious stuff (although I would love to learn more about them if you could point me in the right direction, or better yet, tell me about them here! So that being said, I really love Neema's design, and seeing her in this gym setting is a really nice thing to see! The colour choice of purple here really complements her as a whole, and the lipstick is a very nice touch! All in all, it's just really cool to see a sort of "modernised" Neema (her out of her element essentially).As hard as it is though, focusing on something that Isn't Neema, I have to say I think this is a very interesting scenario you have set up here, and if possible I'd like to hear more about it! It seems in the context of all this, vore is a sort of normal thing, and what's more, her prey isn't exactly unwilling either, aha. I'm very intrigued, so by all means do tell!

On to the art itself, I'll try and work from the ground up. So starting with her posture, you've done an amazing job here. It looks insanely natural, and nothing looks out of place at all. It honestly amazes me how for a creator who almost always has a shot of a woman leaning her ass back at the viewer, you seem to have new postures each time you create a piece for the most part, that's honestly incredible to me, but I digress (The one bane of commenting on a fetish piece is no matter how hard I try, something always sounds dirty, aha). Moving from there, you have the lighting and the shading, which is honestly something you're amazing at, and it never ceases to amaze me how good it is. You've applied shading in all of the right areas, places that should have shading, all indeed having shading! Everything from thing's you would expect, like the curvature on her rear/thighs and even crack, her underarms, to the more subtle things that would often go unnoticed like the shading taking place between her shoulder blades, and her nose and hair. And then you go from there, adding the lighting effects to further complement your shading, and just Neema in general, as for instance something I can always look forward to you, is the level of detail of their hair! (Totally what I come for... the hair, and just the hair....) From what I noticed of you, you seem to have a rather simple but amazing pattern for the hair. You would have your base hair, and follow that up with some lighting play to give the hair a level of detail, and from there would simply apply shading (depending on the piece of course) to the inside of her hair for a level of depth, altering the colour of the lining to a slightly darker shade then that, and hair like here for instance being Neema's Ponytail, is very much so complemented by this style (not to mention it goes amazingly with your art style!). Not to be outdone however you have the face itself. Your spacing and proportioning has always been accurate. Her eyes are beautiful, and really do share a close level of detail such as her hair, only it's more evident given how packed in her eyes are. Her lips are beautiful, and her nose is honestly amazing! So even though it's not the largest, feature, the level of detail here being compacted in really does bring her face to the forefront of the piece, without being overpowered by the rear (like her friend there~), and not over powering it. Simply put, they serve to highlight and complement one another. From there you have the expressions in play here, which are honest to god incredible. The smug satisfied grin, the shift in her eyebrows towards the center, her eyes displayed as they are.. everything about this is so incredibly natural to me, and nothing feels off. She just has this smug satisfied confident air about her because of it, and you've done such an amazing job translating that to paper! And then you have her much easier to read friend down there, who seems to be lost in her own bliss, aha. (Side note, oml I love that adorable little snaggle tooth you gave her, and that hat honest to god made me laugh when I first saw it!) All in all, this piece is unsurprisingly incredible, and I can't praise it enough! And with all that being said about what was drawn, the background you added really does serve to complement the piece, so good on you for that!

So I guess that sums it all up! It's a piece a really enjoyed, and honestly it's really intriguing me in so many different areas, and I would just love to here more about it as a whole! And by all means, please let me know if this was helpful, as I had fully intended to comment on the other three pieces uploaded within the month, but had spent a lot more time then I had expected typing this out, aha. So if it's something you'd like to see more of by all means let me know, and I'll try to get the other recent ones when I can!

(Mind the long wall of word vomit)

Posted by VoreGloreX4 6 years ago Report

Wow this is easily the longest comment I’ve ever received. Thank you for it, it means a lot to me for how in-depth you went :)

Like pretty much every artist I’m always trying to improve and often only see the mistakes I made or what I should have better in my drawings, but it’s nice to see someone that found all the good in a drawing. It’s a good perspective to have ;)

Posted by Horoble 6 years ago Report

First off, thanks for taking the time of day to respod to me, and as for the comment, don't mention it. Frankly I enjoyed leaving it! I tried my best to really go into everything I could, but sometimes I tend to struggle with my wording, aha. As for that bit about being super self critical I know exactly what you mean, as you just sort of finish something and get a bit of a high from it, but once that wears off it's almost always "I could have done this better""this is wrong/off", ect. I'm sure as helpful as it is it can be a bit bothersome to have that going on in the back of your head though. That being said I did try my best to look for areas that we're "wrong", or could be improved as hard as I could, and simply couldn't find something to point out, so it just game out as praise more or less. I'll try to leave comments on the other three recent pieces when I can!