Posted by Horoble 6 years ago Report

I have to say dear, I loved this story! It was very cool to see this turn of events, especially done in your style! I have to say, fan girl that I am I just really enjoy scenes taken directly from something, but instead taking a twist from that point on, and in this case a vore twist, aha. It's frankly one of my things to think about! I think the first thing to mention here, is that the characters all seemed to be in character, and frankly seemed to act as they would in their own respective canon, which is frankly super hard to pull off when something like vore is involved, so amazing job there! I have to say, out of your fanfics (it has been a while since I've read some of them so I could be wrong), this has to be one of the ones with the best pacing, if not the best pacing. You didn't just jump straight into vore, you took a scenario, you built it up incredibly well, and when you finally got to the "good part", you didn't rush through it either! There was dialogue, details, ect. It was all just so amazingly done, and I loved reading it! I have to say my favourite part was honestly the interactions closer too Ochako waking up, and watching her innocent personality grasp what happened, and the severity of it all sinking in, all well toga herself remained joyful as ever! It was such a treat to read, amazing job dear!

Posted by mysta 6 years ago Report

Thanks, it's nice to see the effort was rewarded!

Posted by mysta 6 years ago Report

I was trying to find an excuse to set Toga up as a pred, and when Mr Compress' ability appeared... it just fit. And if I was bothering to follow the canon that far, then why not just fit the scene into the action!
Thanks again, feedback on how something was good is always handy ;)

Posted by Monkeyboi111 6 years ago Report

This was very good. I love to see scenarios taken from canon stories and made into elseworlds like this. It give so much opportunity to create taboo bad-ends, and this one just rocked. The pacing was good, the scenario was set up well and the bodily action was spot on. And there's not really anyone prior to this that seems to have stepped up to give Toga a spotlight as a pred!

Looking forward to hopefully more bad-end canon changes to this as well as other series, and Even leaves potential for a part two in this vein with a certain frog girl?

Regardless, keep up the good work!

Posted by mysta 6 years ago Report

Oh, but good lady villains make the best preds!
I guess a sequel is always an option ;)

Posted by Altimos 6 years ago Report

Holy... cows!!!
That was freaking AWESOME!!!
I'm adding this to my favorites...
I hope you'll continue with her now taunting Deku... and maybe him getting compressed and her having fun with his shrunken ball XD

Posted by mysta 6 years ago Report

Cheers!
Maybe I'll eventually write a continuation, but I'll just leave what she might try open to the imagination for now. ;)

Posted by Flame14 6 years ago Report

Might I ask where you found the images from the story?

Posted by Superdoge645 6 years ago Report

You should do one where Deku and Uraraka get stuck in togas stomach and digested but they die together

Posted by Superdoge645 6 years ago Report

You should do one where Deku and Uraraka get stuck in togas stomach and digested but they die together

Posted by Superdoge645 6 years ago Report

But I really enjoyed that story other then feeling really bad for Uraraka

Posted by Superdoge645 6 years ago Report

@mysta

Posted by mysta 6 years ago Report

Thanks for the comments and feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
I might make more MHA stuff, but probably only when I see the next season.