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Finally, god this chapter was a pain to type, mainly since I had a writers block. But also because this chapter was very sad to type since *spoiler* was one of my favourite characters. It was extra sad since I typed the saddest parts imo to VERY emotional music. Let me know if felt sad while reading this chapter at all.
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I also leaned off of most of the new characters in order to give this chapter to Zero and the others. Next chapter will have more of the new characters, and plenty of Vore :)
However, it was enjoyable to type this chapter with a different tone to it, I also tried to mix my typing styles up. So let me know If this works, I'm open to constructive criticism.
Also if you need an idea as to what Zero looks like now: http://nnata.co.uk/uploads/86/the-best-he-was-found-ontop-of-a-church-with-broken-wing-cant-so-pict-anime-guy-black-hair-and-blue-eyes-styles-trends.jpg (just imagine him with red eyes instead of green)
PS: Luna is the girl in the thumbnail.
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Posted by Coolerer 4 years ago Report
Glad I finally read it. Also relieved that there're some characters to take place of fallen comrade. However, it's really cringy to imagine plot where characters change deceased ones but complete the same role repeatedly.
Posted by KarmaticF8 4 years ago Report
Yeah, it's part of the reason why I stopped working on the series. When I finished this chapter, I had a roadmap as to where I wanted the story to end up and this chapter should've been the only time where characters would end up replacing each other. After a few months, I realized that this wasn't really Akame ga Kill anymore seeing as no one really died after this chapter except for one other character. And even that character was going to get replaced. I sometimes look back at this chapter and things don't make as much sense anymore. And continuing the story would probably make it worse since I had no real direction with story outside of adapting cool scenes with OC's in it. And when I tell myself "I can fix this", the only option I see is a complete re-dux of the whole series. I'm not as into AgK as I was 5 years ago, and maybe this chapter was ultimately the result of fatigue from the series.
That or my highschool writing style is just cringy as all hell XD