Posted by Negator 6 years ago Report

I just always love how you draw Hinata. <3

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

Thanks, she really deserves this much attention :D

Posted by ShinMegamiDerpy 6 years ago Report

Needs an internal view.

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

It always does, maybe next time ;)

Happy you like it!

Posted by Horoble 6 years ago Report

This is honestly just a really amazing piece that you've produced here, I really love it! Truth be told your pieces are all really incredible, that goes without saying, but I was just a tad intimidated to comment, aha. Hopefully even though I'm late to the whole commenting thing I can still offer some valid feedback!

The concept itself I assume was chosen by the commissioner, but I do feel the need to say it's one I'm fond of, being the acid naruto fangirl that I am!

Focusing more on the picture itself however, you've done an amazing job here! The first thing that sticks out to me is the perspective. It's not the first time you've played around with it before, noting pieces like "C7- Truth Image" and "Practice 1" being the first ones to come to mind for different perspectives, but this really seems to be your first attempt at THIS perspective, as it's probably the most complex one you've done to date (IMO at least, I could be wrong and just forgetting a piece). You did an incredible job of both their anatomy and proportioning well under the angle you were under which I think deserves much more credit then I myself am able to give!

Edit - I forgot about the piece "Best (Tasting) Sister Ever (Gift)" which has a very like minded angle/perspective, but truthfully I feel it was implemented much better here, but I would feel bad if I neglected to add that -

The first thing that really catches my eye here is honestly Sakura, simply because she has more of her body visible, and as such, the perspective has a larger effect/influence on how you've drawn her (....and I may or may not just really like Sakura, but I swear that wasn't a factor here! :P). We see her bending over (We see a slight bend in Hinata as well actually, but it's much less evident given the.... circumstances at play). Starting here, we already see this coming into play fully. Specifically on her upper half it highlight's how her left arm is sticking out, as well as despite having a smaller chest herself, a good deal more shading being shown beneath it, which again really goes to highlight the angle/perspective. Moving down from that, it's a pleasent surprise to see her legs aren't neutral at all. Her thigh's are positioned one before the other, and as a result, her right inner thigh received a slight amount more shading then her left, again really going to set the posture. Knees down we see an angle on her right foot complemented by more brilliant shading, and a size difference between her left and right foot to really get off a nice level of accuracy. From there, the shading is the most prominent on her glove, where you masterfully placed it at an area where her palm was curving up to the back of her hand, as well as the appropriate areas along her fingers. She's honestly just masterfully done, and even if she's not involved with vore here, she really does so much for this piece do to how amazingly done she is!

Moving on to her much "Hyuger" friend (Please don't hate me, I couldn't resist! XD), it's very evident Sakura isn't the only one who was done to such a masterful level! Here we don't see nearly as much as her whole body so the perspective play isn't as in effect here, but the way she was drawn around the angle is still incredible. Hinata, like Sakura, has a very natural posture here (given the circumstances that is, hehe) and you've done an amazing job implementing that. She's angled ever so slightly in the direction of sakura (More so chest up), complementing her making great use of the space, which in turn ends up complementing Hinata herself. The way her hand is resting on the side of her gut is very great use of her arm, and with the display of the curve of her elbow there, it shows us that her arm is indeed bent, giving us a feel for just how large she actually is, in such a subtle fashion none the less. Moving on from that the placement/posturing of her other arm was amazing as well, as it really gives off this soft feel that one would come to expect from somebody like Hinata (Bonus points for staying true to the girls themselves here, aha. And I forgot to mention it before so I'll mention it here, the same is true for Sakura, whom you gave a more strong/sturdy pose, which again really complements her character as well, which I just love!). Moving to the heart, or rather "gut" (Two for two! B)) of the piece, I'm not sure where to start with Hinata's upper body. Her breasts look very natural (there really isn't any good way to word this XD) and properly proportioned, and don't really feel like their shape is forced, stiff or rigged, which is already decently hard to do normally, but from an upwards perspective like this one, it can be really hard, and moving off of that, you've gone a stpe further to leave s flesh line(S) beneath them to again indicate towards the perspective of the shot, complementing it further. Moving down from that, you have her belly. The first thing I noticed here is you went with a different style then you normally do. Instead of doing softer features with heavy shading as you normally do, you've taken a different approach here Instead of looking like that, you instead have a very prominent outline that really does tell everything down to the facial expression! The shading is there as usual but not in force like it always is, so instead we have the outline of her prey, with shading based around the lining, as apposed to the regular slightly less detailed mounds with shading used much more in force to complement it. The anatomy of it all is honestly just perfect, and it was interesting to see you trying out a lot of new things on this piece truth be told! (Frankly I would really love to hear why you did it this way! Mind you this isn't me going "Bah bah, this is worse why'd you change it?!", rather I'm always interested in these things, and I'd just really like to know, whether it was experimenting with a new style, just not feeling it, requested, ect. I'm just really intrigued!). Moving on from that, you have her legs. You spread them out here which gives her a much more natural feel right off the bat, and and choosing to have her right foot forward well her left side shifts to face Sakura made her posture that much better to me, and as always, the shading is just... amazing, I can't even!

Edit - I forgot about Chapter 5 - Warm and cozy (external) which is a clear mix of both, amazing shading, and detailing of the prey up to the point where I can make out the details of the palms of the prey's hands and feet via the outline -

From there all you really have is the faces of the girls themselves. Sakura is wearing this amazing look that seems to be a blend of confusion and amazement here, and I really like that! It sort of has me imagining dialogue along the lines of "Is he really in there?" or "Wow, you really got him in there!", where as with Hinata, we get this adorable expression! She's got such a sweet smile on her face, and with the shift of her eyebrows it lets us know that she really is enjoying herself, whether it be because she has Naruto after all these years, or like you said in the description, his struggles just being plain amazing! The hair itself you did a brilliant job of shading, and it's especially evident on Hinata's hair!

And finally you have the background itself! For something you haven't really explored, you've done an amazing job on it! It's very simple in nature, but given your art style insanely complement well holing a level of detail that catches the viewers eyes, but doesn't take away from the piece itself. You went so far as to add detailing to the blades of grass, but kept it towards the edge of the grass itself and by the girls feet (which mind you, the dark green patch as a foothold was just an amazing touch!). The tree's themselves are smoothed out and have no real black lining to them, instantly locking them as the perfect background piece, but keeping the smoother bumps and dents of the wood in to give a level of detail that is further complemented by just how smooth they appear to be. From there you have the darker green grass in the cracks between tree's, and the black space that indicated where the two had come from, which are both simple, but add that much more, and keep the background alive and colourful. Something I think is worth noting here is that between the softer more faded shades you've used here, and the colours as well, the background really does an insane amount to complement the girls here, and even though there's no doubt it took a lot of work, it would be something I would love to see from you more often in the future as it just adds such a beautiful level of depth to it!

I think the only tip for improvement here I have would be more shading. Although lining and general posture do a lot, shading will always go a bit further to help if given the chance. good example would be something akin to what you've done under sakura's chest, going to areas like the bend of Sakura and Hinata's elbows, as well as beneath Hinata's breasts, which would go to further complement the picture's angle, but those are just my thoughts. I greatly enjoyed the piece, and even with that said, I truly think it's one of your better pieces all things taken into consideration.

...Wow, this turned out to be WAY longer then I had ever expected. I appreciate you taking the time to read my word vomit here, and if you don't I understand why needless to say. Hopefully this was a helpful comment to you, and best of luck in future with your pieces!

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

Frist of all, thanks a lot for this comment, i'm very flattered!

I'm gonna be short, but i like how have you understood all the effort i put on thi piece, the shading and the lighting are one of my favorite things to do (their so much important to give that 3D dimension, i'm so glad i'm finally able to communicate that!). Your feedback it's sure appreciated, in particular it's true that it's lacking some shading: Hinata's arm, for example, it's shaded but since the color of her jacket it's white is hard to see the shadows, i have to find a way to resolve this in the future; for some reason, Sakura's hair shading is hard to see too, maybe something wrong on the export or the color.

That said all the minor details you got from the shading alone... it makes me so much proud :D

About the bulge of Hinata's stomach: Yes, it was something the commissioner asked me, but there is more to it. In general i like to change type of stomachs depending on the situation: i like both rounder bellies and more defined bulges, so i alternate whenever i can.

Thanks again for the compliments and feedback!

Last thing, your first story was pretty nice, simple yet effective. I like to see stories that could actually happen whitin another world and having the characters staying somewhat in character (also Perona makes for a nice pred :D)

Posted by Horoble 6 years ago Report

First off, It's a pleasant surprise to hear you went out of your way to actually read that story, truth be told it's something I'm not the most proud of, as it was more rushed out in the high of "Oh my god I got off my butt and did something!", and have every intent of remaking it t some point to sort of slow it down as to not rush through the "fun parts" of the story, as the pacing for me was just... meh, aha.

That aside, I'm super glad to hear you enjoyed the feedback, aha. Truth be told, the shading on Hinata's sleeve I didn't notice, but I personally found the shading on her hair to be fine, rather it was just sort of sticking out more. But I for sure agree with you, as you tried to be subtle with the shading, but unfortunately it struggled to stick out given how well the shades blended. I feel you were going for a shading akin to that of what was done with her skin.

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

I understand your problem with writing so much. I also tend to go on a faster pacing whenever one of the "fun parts" happens. The problem is that i0m good at being synthetic but in those situation a good description is needed :\

Posted by Horoble 6 years ago Report

(You'll have to forgive my late response as I had t attend to something IRL) Mean as it sounds, It's sort of nice to know I'm not the only one struggling with it, aha. That being said it's something I want to work on in the future moving forward, for sure. Aspects that I just, like, really want to get down would for sure be pacing, description, and in terms of stories like that which take place with actual existing characters, staying true to said characters. I think that's one thing in vore that's super over looked that I personally really like. You find all these pieces that feature characters, but it's not so much the character as it is the name or design, if that makes sense, aha. And well those are fun to read/view regardless, there is a very nice aspect of staying true to the character themselves

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

I completely agree, those are the same goals i have in mind for how i write stories.

So, hope you the best and see you next time!

Posted by IzakDiesel 6 years ago Report

Hinata is now a classic pred lol

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

It's strange, from her personality you would assume to see her in the role of prey more!

Not that there's a reason to complain :D

Posted by IzakDiesel 6 years ago Report

but honestly i prefer her as a pred, and I think a lot of people has the same opininon as me, that's because Hinata is now one of the most used anime girls as a pred, same case with Luka from Vocaloid

Posted by ChrisW 6 years ago Report

I'm constantly going back to this picture cause it's so fun to me. Really fun to see Naruto struggling inside and Hinata just enjoying the struggles.

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

And the funniest part is that Sakura is there, just pointing at him, like it's an everyday thingy. It was pretty fun to do :D

Posted by ChrisW 6 years ago Report

Thank you for the wonderful piece.

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

Happy that you like it :D

Posted by ChrisW 6 years ago Report

I really do. If I could commission you for other stuff, I feel like I would get my money's worth.

Posted by Ilove 6 years ago Report

Thanks for the compliments! Your support is plenty enough :D

Posted by ChrisW 6 years ago Report

You're welcome.