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If you've read my work.
And it made you grin.
Plus you've got spare coin.
And the times aren't thin.
If you hope for more.
Cause it brightens your day.
Then I hope you'll consider.
Slinging change my way.
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Posted by Andris 6 years ago Report
Over 2200 views, no comments. I'm trying to figure out if that's bad or not. e.e
Posted by Dragoxl17 6 years ago Report
Hmmmmm
Posted by Kurczak48 5 years ago Report
Honestly dunno how I never read your work, it's really good!
You probably know that already(after all nearly 9 months passed) but I think cutting it into smaller parts would be clever.
I mean...at first when I saw the lenght on it I wouldn't invest so much time reading it if I didn't get to know your style from your recent works, which are... I think around half the size of it ^^
It's very enjoyable to read, both description and dialogues are lovely. Development of characters is also a nice touch.
So far I read half of this chapter and I still see new additions coming around ^^
Posted by Andris 5 years ago Report
I will take your advice and chop it up a bit. But I need to separate it into better chapters.
Posted by Andris 5 years ago Report
I'm so honored that all these months later people are still reading this story. Even if you never say anything. Thank you. ^_^
Posted by Dooot 5 years ago Report
The story itself is great,but the fornant makes it hard to read. There should be more spaces between paragrapsh and actual quotation marks instead of these floating starts and it would be perfect.
Posted by Andris 5 years ago Report
What do you mean floating starts? If you mean * asterisks, they represent telepathic speech. Quotations represent speaking out loud. It's how I keep track.
I will take your advice on the spacing.
Posted by Andris 3 years ago Report
The 5000 view mark is officially crossed.. Another chapter it is.
Posted by Voremugen 3 years ago Report
Wonderful read. Really liked it. Thank you for writing. I envy Troy right noe, wish to be in his position xD
Posted by Andris 2 years ago Report
And now we're at 7000. Wow. I'm very honored.