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My second vore story, skipped the swallowing on this one.
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Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report
nothing bad, practice makes master, keeps writing
Posted by 157and493 5 years ago Report
A really good story, I absolutely loved all the burping it contained.
The way you did the dialogue was a bit confusing though.
Posted by BUMBLING 5 years ago Report
ya im still working on it, ill try to do better next time.
Posted by BUMBLING 5 years ago Report
thx for the likes, i appreciate it. :)
Posted by UserMan90 5 years ago Report
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